First off, you're grammer is absolutely terrible, i mean i', always being told off for my grammer and i don't want to sound like the pot calling the kettle black but yours is just ridiculous and shouldn't Yachiro's birthday be the day Kenpachi adopted her.

But apart for all that it was a cute little story and damn her for he cleverness

Hee hee that was cute ().

AWW! that so was so cute! you should write a sequel about her birthday!