Reviews for Luck |
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![]() ![]() ![]() really like this story, pity you haven't updated! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Its been a really long time since this was updated, i dont want to pressure you but would you be able to tell us about weather or not your thinking of continuing or not. ? im really sorry if im coming across as a bitch... :( |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please tell me that this isn't the end! |
![]() ![]() ![]() UPDATE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was pretty good, she was a wee bit Mary-Sue-ish, but not too bad. I'll be looking forward to how it turns out. -ZH |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey I love the story! :) update soon! 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() i really love this story so far, hope you continue. please update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha, loved her response to the principle's question if there was something funny. Maybe her tiredness at the end has something to do with there randomly being Cybertronian in her art? Maybe not lol Can't wait for the next chapter! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think the first two chapters are great and very well written.I like storys that are easy to follow along with as you read,and I think you did just keep it up. - ;3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think you should just make your chappies a lil bit longer and I would love it even more _ but you make up for that by updating pretty quickly! Please continue! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVE IT! XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think its a good start, I'd certainly be interested in reading more. To be honest I don't really know if she's a mary-sue or not, I'd have to read more about her :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have yet to master the please-don't-kill-me smile xD Not bad so far. |
![]() ![]() great start! i little fast, but i like the idea. umm ... i don't know what your definition of a Mary-Sue is, but i'd have to say, at this point in time, no, she isn't. i'll let you know if it seems she's starting to, though. |