I like the main characters, but the OCs are just annoying. No offense

looking forward to the next chapter, hope you pair Alex with Hilda

I'll be honest, that latest chapter was not satisfying. It did not include many interesting events besides Munna being liberated. It was too short, too. I'm trying not to complain, but a roughly 1500 words chapter with nothing interesting whatsoever?

I can't stop grinning while reading this one. Seriously, Alex and Hilda are sooooo cute together. And the ice scream is really fluffy. Awwwww...

Anyway, I like Ben. Even if he's really lazy, he's really funny. And, I get the feeling that there's really more to him than meets the eye.

P.S: I can't wait to know what happened to Alex and Hilda! D:

P.S.S: Will you put Dualrivalshipping in this? :D

asdfghjjkl! It's HILDA! Yaaaaaaaayyyyy! And she's the front cover of the magazine, too. And here I thought it would be that annoying primadonna. But, yes! Omo~! Now, I can't wait for their reunion with her *cough* boyfriend *cough* I'm hyped up! So looking forward to the next chapter!

sneeking at the library to drop this review,
Mizhera

Hmm, published last 2011 and continued now to 2017 with 26 chapters so far. So roughly 4 chapters PER year huh...kinda slow on the updates. At this pacing, chapter 30 will be reached NEXT year. Oh well...sorry for me being a whiny prick but that's just how I feel.

ASDFFGHJKL! HILDA! WAAAAHHHH! I really can't wait to see her again! This is really great! Omo~ Excuse me for acting quite a crazy fangirl but I really can't help it! :D The chapter's really interesting. Lot's of actions in just one update. Wieeee! Oh, yeah. Sorry if I wasn't able to send you the profile of my new OC for your Jhoto Adventures. I was really busy. But maybe I'll send it to you later. :3

Anyway, I'm really excited for your next update soon! Have a nice day~ ;)

So if Alex's dad is Red then that means Red's full name is Red Black unless Alex took his mother's name.
Anyway I love this story! Keep it up! Also what is your update schedule

Please update

This is interesting. Although, I'm a bit bothered. Who are these Cheren's parents, really? Don't tell me the father us Red? Waaaah! Nooooo! T.T what will happen to the burningleafshipping. Okay, enough of my fangirl side. xD still, the chapter is great and it just shows how much a reckless person Alex is even as a child. Although, I don't have a clue on the new character, I do hope it's Red! :D

P.S: Are you a protagonist-shipper? :3 I mean do you usually ship protagonistxprotagonist? Just wondering. :D Also, will you put the B2W2 characters here?

Hoping to hear more from you soon! ;) Have a nice day!

-Mizhera

Please bring back munna.
The way you described it made it sound so sad

Connected to that 'Red Leaf' one shot?

YEEEEEEEEESSSS! Wow, that was exhilarating to read! I've been looking for a good Black and White story for some time, and man did it feel good to read this. I LOVE this story, and I really feel like it captures the essence of the game. The forest may be named after a Pinwheel, but damn did it scare me a little (Excuse my French). I really feel like this story will be a good one, and it's just so GOOD AND DETAILED AND THE GRAMMAR IS GOOD THANK THE HEAVENS MOST PEOPLE HERE WRITE WITH A 4TH GRADERS GRAMMAR AND YES DETAILS DETAILS DETAILS AND NO RUN ON SENTENCES AND I JUST FEEL SO NICE INSIDE BECAUSE ITS JUST SO WONDERFUL TO KNOW THAT PEOPLE HAVE GRAMMAR YESSSSSSS! Wooh, okay, I feel like my feelings have been vented out now. I love this story, and please update soon! (If your schedule allows it, no need to rush). Have a good summer!
~ Green Oak

Daaaaw so that's how Alex got the Petilil. Such a cute chapter!

Petilil was talking to a large monster...

Virizion confirmed.

Alex also confirmed to now use Verizon.

Talk your time, doc. We can wait.

Or at least I can.