"He has a way with words. Not piecing them together, so much. Luke is no poet."
"He laughed insanely against my skin."

Gods. This is so perfect for them.

Update :D

Awesome:P

this story kinds of hurts so good~ loved it!

First Percy Jackson fic...?

Feels like you've been writing Luke/Percy FOREVERRRR...

Lol.

This was great.

oh...oh oh oh oh... lovers today.. enemies the next... it was great

awww! This is so sad...and so sweet!

i love how u put them in this situation where they can only be together for so long and till make the story amazing!

Pretty cool.

Really good first Percy Jackson fic :)

Wow! Your fic is great! I can't believe this is your first fic about this couple. It seems like you're an expert.

I hope you'll write some others. I love this couple, but it's so difficult to find another fic to read. Mostly of them aren't complete yet, and I don't think they'll ever be. So, it's good to see that someone else still writes it, even though I haven't written one myself.

Anyway, you have my approval!

See ya! ~~

i hope this is not a one shot because its good and you should mke it atleast two or more chapters you know too see what he thinks during the actual wa and when Luke dies