Kyyyyaaaaaaaaaah I love iiiiiiiiiiiit!

HAHAHAHAHA HE CALLED HIM PRINCESS HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

Who cares I like the Seto dragging and Seto kissing. w B3

My thoughts exactly about the batt when I played the game. They have such amazing AI like Crow or P.F. and there's no extra batt for them, which just makes no sense. Such technology and they don't develop green tech like Crow getting charge from the Sun or something...

Do you see this sweater I made? Of course you don't. You only see a puddle of water. That sweater/puddle of water is made out of my tears. Thank you for making me cry you a river. Just, ooh boy, that was the best Fragile Dreams fanfiction I've ever read. Thank you so freaking much for sharing this with the world. It's absolutely perfect in every single way.

AH MAH GAD! This is soooo wonderful! I love how you made Seto and Crow exactly the same like in the game!/ And then Crow being all cocky This is really cute! I'm smirking so hard! 3

Awwwww, such a cute ending in this chapter! Giving you some praise from a sort-of-seasoned fanfic writer.

You're very talented, I gotta say! This is an awesome story, I won't mind reading any other ones by you )

Your story was amazing, I could understand how Seto would feel knowing that he was going to be put to sleep, and not knowing when he was going to wake up. I loved the ending though, maybe I'm a sucker for happy endings? I certainly like them better than sad ones (lol).

One thing I don't like is it having to end. (I'm that way with pretty much every ending..) but I suppose all good things must come to an end right?

But I really can't say just how much I had enjoyed the story!

Great story overall! Thank you so much for this piece. I can truly say that I feel more at peace with the game now than I did before I read your story. I felt very unfinished and unresolved when the game ended, and I found myself wanting more, more, more. So I looked for any anime, comics, or even concept art that would help me resolve the feeling of an unended story in my mind. Then I found this story, which I feel is really a stroke of brilliance. Something about your writing rings true. I can see this being the actual events following the game, so I just want to again say thank you.

Just an idea: the whole story is premised on Seto's having radiation sickness, right? Well, at the end of the game, once you are in the labs, there is that one and only room in the game that causes your health to decay. On the door of that room, which Sai tells Seto is "dangerous" and not to tarry, there is the universal symbol of radiation danger. I thought that this might be one possible "solve" for the story's plot, because Seto passed through this room full of nuclear waste before fighting the final boss. Just an idea if you ever do any revisions!

Oh wow, I love this! It's just how I envisioned the events following the conclusion of the game. Of course Seto would try to revive his friends. I am also very impressed by your writing style. You have a great grasp of details and story ebb and flow. I feel myself already familiar with the characters as you are describing; your attention to detail is admirable. Thanks again for this wonderful piece! Can't wait to read the next chapter...

wow! I simply loved this fanfiction, once i read the first chaper i couldn't stop! I love the fact that you put it into a realistic setting (how seto had raidiation sickness and all)I thought it was so sweet/sad how you added quotes from the game as well. Great story over all!

AWWW! I almost cried with Crow's closing line... I love the story thus far, and I WILL finish it! :D

I just read all this over a period of a few days... It took a lot of willpower to not neglect everything else and just read this!

It was very interesting. I think that this is one of my favorite Fragile Dreams fics, if not my favorite. I could follow along with it easily regarding what we know in canon - nothing was added that didn't make sense in some way, it was definitely reasonable. I loved the subtlety of the relationships. You said in the beginning that you thought Seto and Crow had a friendship just a bit past platonic, and you carried it all the way through. I thought that was neat. Quite a few authors succumb to the temptation to go all out in their pairings, and while those are fun too, I think that this one stands out because this was an especially strong romantic friendship... that never really crossed that line. You know? It's refreshing to read that kind of stuff too, especially in a good-sized fic like this.

All a way of saying that I really enjoyed this! I hope you do write more for Fragile Dreams eventually.

It's a very good story Thanks you for write it

Aww its over?