Reviews for A Lost Soul
Lisa Lloyd 1974 chapter 17 . 3/26/2016
~*Just LOVE ur story's so much & wish u would write more*~...;)
Ashmo21 chapter 53 . 11/2/2014
I absolutely loved this story! Thank you so much for sharing it. I hope to read new stories from you.
Baie Noire chapter 53 . 2/28/2014
It's a good story... but, I don't think the flogging part was necessary. Arthur is a kind man and will never agree to do something like that. :s
MedievalSnow chapter 53 . 12/11/2013
Sadly, all good things must come to an end. I'm referring to the story, not the flogging. I'm glad that's over, but it definitely was not good; It was awful for Lorna. I imagine Arthur is not going to be very popular with the knights for a long time. Thanks for inviting us along for the journey with Tristan and Lorna. Great job!
brandibuckeye chapter 53 . 12/2/2013
Omg! I cannot believe this is the end! I love reading about these two and I am so sad to see it end. It was a great journey to read and thank you for writing something so worth reading!
Kristall chapter 53 . 11/30/2013
As sorry as I am to see this end, it was time. Wonderful story, though I do think Abigail got off too easily. Still, the rest was fantastic, as usual! Much love, Kristall

P.S. I'm still writing. It's just my laptop died. Xp
Gargoyle13 chapter 53 . 11/30/2013
Thanks for the sentiment.

Overall this was a good chapter and wrapped up the story with the family back together, everyone in one piece (more or less) and life continuing on at the fort. I admit I got a bit turned about in the middle on the way to the flogging by who was doing what and to/with whom but it sorted itself.

I know you are glad this story is finally over. I hope you find another storyline to undertake.
xxyangxx2006 chapter 53 . 11/28/2013
Nice way to end things, with the family together... even though it was after her punishment. Great job by the way on this as a whole and even though I am sad to see this is over, I had a fun ride! Keep up the great work in any other works you take a crack at.
Kristall chapter 52 . 11/25/2013
Hey there! Glad to see another chapter up for this great story. Hope things go well for Lorna, but I don't think she'll get out of this. I'll be back, I can't wait to see what will happen! Till then! _
Gargoyle13 chapter 52 . 11/25/2013
I had to go back and re-read the previous chapters. Will be interesting to see how this unfolds further and what those ramifications are to everyone involved.
xxyangxx2006 chapter 52 . 11/8/2013
I forgot to review on this! Well Anyway I love this story! I love how you added your OC characters into the world and I love how the relationship between Lorna and Tristan came to be. That and I just love what you had them go through even though some wasn't that nice, but it builds character! Keep up the fantastic work!
MedievalSnow chapter 52 . 10/28/2013
Oops, that review should have been posted under Chapter 52 and not Chapter 50. Sorry.
MedievalSnow chapter 50 . 10/28/2013
Thanks for the new chapter! Well, the first words that come to mind after reading this chapter (if I can borrow a phrase from George Takei) are "Oh Myyyy!" I glad to see that Tristan is finally acting like a loving husband and not the horse's rear end that he was in the Putting His Foot Down chapters. I'm still mad at him though - he called Lorna a "bitch". He should be ashamed of himself. Can't wait to see what happens next!
brandibuckeye chapter 52 . 10/27/2013
Yay for the update! It's so suspenseful, I can't wait to see what happens! Please update again soon!
ferretfood chapter 51 . 10/14/2013
I read this entire story in a day! I was a little scared of Lorna's character being a Mary Sue because of her skills in battle and her wearing pants, but there's plenty of flaws that she has repercussions for, and she has become more feminine and settled as her children grow up. I am very impressed! Keep going with this story! I want more!
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