Reviews for Rebellious Wizard book 2
Guest chapter 5 . 5/8
What about Sirius Black?
Guest chapter 1 . 5/2
Simple answer to how the magicals knew about Harry's scar is Fumblemort wanted it known. Then there's always Hagrid. He can't keep his mouth shut when he's drunk. He also has the bad habit of opening his mouth without thinking first. So there's three simple answers to that question.
Majerus chapter 5 . 4/20
It was a lot of fun, sad that it was not continued.
I think you left many readers happy and a few plot bunnies bouncing around in some author's minds :)
Majerus chapter 1 . 4/19
Holy crap, you are So Right about the scar - How Could it be Famous!? lmao, fantastic.

Odd that Dobby didn't warn Harry at the Grangers, but past that pretty straight forward within your AU. I would suggest adding Goblin Wards to the home, both for their protection and to keep dumbles out... oh, that's the same thing :p Anyway, it would solve the Dobby thing, too.
Kira Potter Jackson chapter 1 . 2/9
Dobby's good.
Draco doesn't learn more.
And Sirius?
Kira
Nebby chapter 5 . 11/14/2019
Just had a very enjoyable afternoon reading this series
Please keep up the good work, a great take on the HP story
James chapter 5 . 11/8/2019
Miss your mind
And your heart
Wise Lion 17 chapter 5 . 9/11/2019
I have just finished my second round of this book and am excited for the third book to be written!
Khatix chapter 5 . 8/31/2019
Seeing how this Fic series is over and the author passed away im going to leave my own little ending here.

During the summer Harry/Hermione meet Fleur and her family when she noticed he was immune to her Allure and found out Gabby was a year younger than them end up becoming friends. Later during the summer they are informed of Sirius being released and how Dumbledore kept him locked up, after hearing about the Rat they owl'ed Amelia about it. Pettigrew was caught, tried, and without Dumbledore 2nd chance crap was given the kiss.

Gabby hearing about their wandless magic catches onto it fast because if her Vela nature and being able to summon fire balls. Also knowing how she has a delayed puberty (Vela thing) they invite her to join them during next term for their magical tutoring while doing muggle correspondence education and the Delcaurs offer the use their home for the magical tutoring and part of the cost. Sirius joins them teaching them Ouclmency and for Christmas they are joined by the Tonk's where Dora and Fleur make fast friends over their shared poblems with dating because of Metamorph/Vela. Sirius give Harry and Hermione the Animiagus reveal potion to find their form. Harry ends up being an all black Gryphon with streaks of pale white throughout his body and his emerald eyes, Hermione ends up being a cheetah with a bushy tail and brown spots. Fleur/Tonks end up dating and later on get married and Tonks using her meta powers is able to get Fleur pregnant having three kids together, first born is a Vela/Metamorph daughter, then twin Vela daughters.

The TwT happens but the tasks are not as dangerous, include a few more tasks and even a full dueling tournament for those who didn't make champion, Harry/Hermione attend the tasks with Tonks to watch Fleur compete and she wins the tournament.

Harry and Hermione end up bringing Gabby into their relationship when they start to fall for her as well, Hermione becomes Lady Potter and Gabby Lady Black as Harry is Sirius heir. Hermione has four children three boys all with Potter hair style two black one brown all have Harry's eyes, and one daughter who has Hermione's bushy hair thats as red as Lillys was and with Hermione's eyes. Gabby has four kids, first is Twins with a first born son with a Vela sister who shockingly has Lilly's red hair with silver streaks instead of the Vela blonde and silver streaks instead and her eyes are a silverish green instead of silverish blue, the next two kids are normal Vela.

Harry majors in enchanting and cursebreakering who teaches both as 6th and 7th year subjects at Beauxabons while also being the flying instructor and Quiditch referee. Hermione ends up getting a potions mastery and replaces Snape as youngest Potions Mistresses by getting her mastery at 17, she ends up being the Libarian at Beauxabons while also researching new potions and invents many. Harry ends up coming up with a Werewolf "cure" by inventing and enchanting a ring that can be worn to prevent transformation as well as a ward designed to keep transformed werewolfs inside while letting them walk out when human again that is used for a werewolf preserve so they can transform and run as a pack. Gabby becomes a VERY skilled and effective healer because of her wandless training is better able to control and direct the healing spells, she works at Beauxabons as a medi with and works out of the local hospital as well.

When the goblins hear about the diary they take up the hunt for the Horrorcrux's and Riddle dies as a floating dust cloud summer between 4th and 5th year being unable to posses anything to weakend state. Harry was never a Horrocrux his moms protection prevented thar and the scar pain was the protection way of warning him Tom is close by. Crouch Jr was caught at the Quiditch World Cup and given the kiss.

Hogwarts eventuality gets up to date but Harry/Hermione never return to attend nor does their kids, Draco ended up becoming a sterile squib after the events on the platform at end of 2nd year. Ron repeats 3rd year and drops out after failing his OWL's, Ginny ends up with Romilda Vane and they have some disturbing nights together involving strapons and Harry Potter glamors. Luna ends up making friends with Colin Creevy during their 2nd year and end up together who happily bring his camera to their many adventures both on hunts and bedroom.
mako234 chapter 5 . 7/26/2019
More Please!
Rebmul chapter 4 . 7/17/2019
shame we will never get to see the ending of this series broomstick truly was a great author
Guest chapter 1 . 5/17/2019
About what harry looked or petunia could have sent him photos every year so that dumbledore (ad)
Would know what he looked like or more sinister he used harrys invisibility cloak to spy on him then used a penseive and took pictures inside of it of harry.
Basically he knew how the dursleys treated harry
illymal chapter 5 . 3/14/2019
Great story an great writer she is entertaining the angels l with her amazing stories
Kira Potter Jackson chapter 5 . 2/28/2019
Dear broomstik
Hi.
I love story, there are very funny.
I would like to know if you are going to make one for the other books?
Kira
Rebmul chapter 5 . 10/14/2018
its a shame if there was ever more we didn't get it
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