Really nice story. Great imagination, good English and good spelling. What’s not to love?

I don't see how this magically makes things better... And now the boy that was James will never exist, he might still be genetically the same but his life is gone. That's a pretty extreme fix for her fuck-up.

I think the 'Hermione Jean Granger' you love to portray in your stories is your biological sister.

So basically Harry has to live with the memories of Hermione stealing his family for 15 years, but Hermione gets away with it blissfully scott free with no consequences or even fucking reprimand. The previous reviewer was right about your fic.

You are a piece of shit.

The twist with the long range time turner is new, but I'm afraid I'll never be able to enjoy fics like this. I realize that AU fics don't require any of the characters to be in character, but Hermione doing this to Harry is so cruel that I just can't enjoy it. If you use the premise that all Harry wants when the war is over is to have a family, then to make something like Hermione keeping that family away from Harry plausible, you only have a couple of options really:

The first option is that Harry and Hermione aren't close enough friends for Harry to tell her (or for her to at least guess) that all he wants when the war is over is to have a family of his own, so when she does run off pregnant with his kid, she's not doing it with the knowledge that she's depriving him of what he's always wanted. With this option, the justification she used here that she "didn't want to tie Harry down" would have been genuine because she really wouldn't have known that Harry wants a family. It wouldn't have made running away and hiding herself and his son from him a whole lot better, but at least she could honestly say that she didn't know he'd want a family and wasn't about to "burden" him with one. In this scenario, they've both been irresponsible anyway and for someone as smart and usually so thoroughly prepared for anything as Hermione to fail to use protection in any case, makes her definitely OOC.

The second option is that Harry and Hermione are close enough to know they want to start a romantic relationship and are theoretically aware of everything that could entail, especially when they start a sexual relationship, but Hermione gets cold feet when she finds out she's pregnant and instead of respecting Harry enough to at least find out whether he wants a family with her or not, she runs off with hardly any notice and doesn't even try to contact Harry for over a decade to tell him she had a kid that's his.

That would be cruel enough, but when he finally tracks her down and makes her explain herself, she gives him a way to go back and have the family he's always wanted and the knowledge that she tried to deprive him of it without burdening her younger self with that same knowledge, so she gets to be blissfully ignorant of everything she put him through beyond the 9 months that she's had to live with it after she left him, while he has to have it in his head forever that she abandoned him and kept his family from him for 15 years and he did everything in his power to find her, likely hoping that the worst hadn't come to pass the whole time.

Irresponsible Hermione is OOC enough. Irresponsible Hermione compounded by cruel Hermione, whether her intentions were pure or not, is too OOC for me to enjoy. The time turner twist at least made it unique, but I can't get past what your Hermione did to your Harry.

Such a wild ride being so short. Glad it went well in the end.

I have trouble reading these types of stories. Hermione who knows Harry better than anyone in the world runs when pregnant worried about him. There is only one thing he wants more in the world than a big family and that is her. And in these she deprives him of both.

Thankfully in this she gave him a way to get it all back again.

As much as I love ALL of your stories, I honestly didn’t like this one as much. It had a good backstory but the way wrote the plot I did not like.
See I don’t believe in being able to just, jump back to the past and change everything. To change your entire future. See, I’d be okay if it was something small, like in JK’s Prisoner of Azkaban, how they saved Buckbeak. But you changed absolutely everything about Harry’s outcome.

I wasn't really feeling this one. At all. The way it played out in the end especially. But I am going through your work now and do love some. Keep writing and keep up the good works.

Omigod. i just can't express my love for you. X6XxXcutestXxX9X

Yeah, sorry, but this is just retarded.

Question! James grew up with a British mom but also grew up in America surrounded by Americans. Would he have a British accent or an American one?

This is good, gonna assume you like the names Aurora and Miranda?

great story but with every great story i wished it was longer... sort of a new twist to the Harry Potter series, now off to find some more Harry potter fan fictions

This is a sweet fiction. For two people so close, they just have so hard a time sharing their mutual feelings,

D. Page Robin

Wow another great story. Really fast but great