Buena historia

Hi there

A shy Naruto is very rare these days, a good read indeed!

Keep up the good work!

I really do enjoy the series, but Hiashi being fatherly to Hinata all of a sudden, seems rather abrupt

Please update soon, it’s brilluant!

I’m pretty sure Naruto was the first one to ever physically hurt Gaara ! Nice headbutt!

I like it but you’ve got to admit that Sasuke saying this kind of stuff is weird

It would be extremely of Danzo to use his arm in his spar with Hiruzen

For franzaustria
pathetic troll Go read fics of your beloved sakura.

So, was this before Ino met Sakura? Because I think that would count as bringing a shy person out of her shell.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

Why would Sakura drop out? Kys

Well I appreciate that you tried to give a twist to canon but it’s hard to believe that Ebisu, Konohamaru, Moegi and Udon would be the ones to get this mission.

Well, good start to the Chuunin exams. Keep up the good work!

Now I hope I didn’t come off as rude in my previous reviews, I just want to help.

“wondering when that particular bit of information had dawned on him, then shook his head at how obvious it was now that he thought of it” Sorry but you can’t do this... it’s a horrible way of delivering information. It’s akin to “abracadabra now you know it !”

Nice chapter but once again things feel rushed at times. The discussion about the fox is the first thing that comes to mind. You could’ve elaborated a little more on it. It’s something really ground breaking and I doubt that Mizuki could’ve (or even would’ve) told Naruto when they had their short discussion.