Very clever. With a somewhat sweet ending.

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-Katie

This is cute. I truly like it, especially Severus' note at the end. :) The fact that you had me enjoying this is a significant achievement because I don't like the Severus/Lily pairing. Silly me. Great job, good descriptions, mood, style.

Very fresh and heart warming.

I liked it. I think I will enjoy reading your other fics. Thank you for sharing :)

awe xD that made me smile :)

Very nice.

I'm loving every one of your stories! You're an excellent writer.

It was really cute to see how much they miss each other.

Great! You have Lily's perspective perfectly!

A really good piece. A slightly more sensible and perceptive Lily, a Severus with a sense of humor and irony.