Reviews for Sweet Root |
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psyfic55 chapter 1 . 7/18/2015 That was a tasty bit o' scrum. |
badkidoh chapter 1 . 3/29/2015 Good story. |
Ravenni chapter 1 . 8/19/2013 Aww it was cute! and here I thought it would turn into a sad ending... xD |
Guest chapter 1 . 2/12/2013 Haha cute! XD |
ArwenFairTinuviel chapter 1 . 7/11/2012 I really enjoyed this story too, although Summer Shade has to remain my favourite ;) Severus drunk is a rare but most entertaining sight! I love his frustration at the malfunctionings of his body. Understandably he feels like he is terribly witty, but Severus is usually rather witty, I wish he realised how perfectly he comes out with words... It's hilarious how Lily's control over her thoughts are so hampered at present, ending up with incredibly sexual images of Severus, fuelled by her desires. 'Show me more sometime, hmm?' Oh his eyes full of heat, they are SO irresistible! I love your writing! It makes me love Severus oh so very much. 'He couldn't believe what was happening, but certainly wasn't going to ask any fucking questions.' Too right, nor am I! I love the ending, it is satisfying compared to heartbreaking in Summer Shade... Severus' pose is SO arousing and I truly empathise with Lily's feral growl-purring noise... You really make us want him! |
DofD chapter 1 . 11/27/2011 AMAZING! |
Draco Oblivion chapter 1 . 6/19/2011 LOOOL! "Not you asshole the other one up top" XD Aw, this was great GO SEVERUS AND LILY! :D |
Jungle Jenna chapter 1 . 4/21/2011 I discovered this story last night and I must say that I'm quite a fan of your Lily/Snape stories. You put the perfect amount of detail in this one. It left me wanting more but also left enough to the imagination. |
HelixForward chapter 1 . 1/30/2011 Lovely story.I especially love the ending :) |
lastcrazyhorn chapter 1 . 1/23/2011 Hmm, I think you wrote Sevvy really well. Shifting emotions and all that. :) Oh and I loved his mental responses to himself. lol |
crankedxburned chapter 1 . 1/16/2011 Oooooooooooooooh you're a cheeky minx and this was fab 3 I got to the bottom and was like, "WAT, no moar?" I enjoyed this :) |
Rago Dragovian chapter 1 . 1/16/2011 Great story! |
Alisonven chapter 1 . 1/15/2011 I was just perusing some of my stories and saw that you have me listed as one of your fave writers! Which is kind of a coincidence, since you're definitely one of mine. But I don't think I've ever said, so I decided to rectify that straight away! I love your depictions of Sev/Lily, and wish it had been that way in canon. But then I guess, there'd be no Harry Potter. Thanks! |
Rencha chapter 1 . 1/13/2011 Teehee loved it |
Mini Nicka chapter 1 . 1/12/2011 Loved it! |