this is sooo amazingly good, but im wondering if i should try and find the sequal because there have been some other ones that i have read where the originals have been amazing and then i have started reading the sequal ind it suck ed and has now tarnished my vew on the original(scribbelings of a redhead and a quidich captain anyone.)

Sooo... opinions?

They got to hold hands!

Aww. I like this.
The chapter is intriguing.

How can they do spells when they're underage and still have the Trace on them?

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lol funny spelling error:
Shrinking Shack" Ginny spoke up as she looked at him intently.

"It's to small" Harry answered her

I tried to read it, but was unable to get through the entire chapter because you do not understand run on sentences and the fact that you need punctuation. It's probably a good story but the grammar is atrocious.

loved your story!
could not stop reading, it was great!:))
cant wait to start reading the sequel

Oh My God! I am loving ur story soooooooooooo much. Great work.

3 3 3

1000's of roses for you.

Gonna start the squeal tmrw :)

Lots Of Love,

Harini

This was an absolutely fantastic story. I spent far too many hours reading it; no joke, it had to have been at least 7 straight hours (which I should have been using to read for school...oh well).

You did a great job with this, and I can't wait to read the sequel! (Though I can't let myself do that until I do some schoolwork) O:-)

OH MY GODS im on chapter forty-something and LOVE IT!

OMG. This is like THE Best FF Ive ever read.

Jackie blushes so much!

oh god, started hyperventalating :(

"No me first" Fred said pushing his twin out of the way and standing in front of it. They had previously done Boggarts in their third year.

Fred looked at the Boggart in front of him his twin lay still on the floor covered in blood Fred raised his wand just as it showed his whole family in front of it.

"Riddikulus!" Fred exclaimed pointing his wand straight at the Boggart. He no longer saw the deaths of his family but himself and George pranking McGonagall's room with dung bombs. Both twins snickered as George pushed him out of the way neither seeing Jackie step back out of her dad's room and watching them from the top of the stairs.

"Wicked right my turn!" George exclaimed as he stood waiting a similar Boggart appeared for George although this time he could see both his twin and Jackie lay out across each other both of them covered in blood. 'It's not real George' he had to repeat to himself."Riddikulus!" he shouted pointing his wand straight at the Boggart. He could now see the three of them at the Burrow pranking his mother.

This would be better if the sentences didn't run together...