So very sweet and emotional! I could totally see this happening in the game. It should have happened! Very well done! _

~Anima~

Wow. This should have been an actual cut scene in the game. Very well done.

This is one of the most emotionally powerful on-shots I have read in a long time... Very well done. I am still stunned by it. You captured the characters perfectly. You are truly gifted.

Thanks for sharing this awesome work of art.

:-)

Jinx

Your story had a nice pace to it. Enough details to know what was going on. Emotional, which is great. Good job. :)

loved it