Reviews for Promise |
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![]() ![]() Besides the fact that I had to translate something every 5 seconds this was amazing |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow that almost made me cry it was so heartfelt and touching |
![]() ![]() wow. absolutely stunning. I find it to be so full of inspiring and heartbreaking emotions at the same time, so painful and yet so warm... Outstanding work! |
![]() ![]() Your french sucks but it is a very cute little story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was lovely... I can imagine Tamaki skating like that. It suits him. Thank you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() *eye twitch* please tell me that the skater was not Johnny Weird. Please. Great story! Loved it! I just pretended that Michael Weiss knows French and didn't curse and it was FLAWLESS in my mind :) -M |
![]() ![]() ![]() I has no idea who the american dude is but I am american so can I still has a cookie? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Très bien! I took French I last year and I will soon be taking French II. I loved your incorporation of the language, very well placed. French is such a wonderful language, non? Also, are you fluent in French? Just curious. Au revoir~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was a really good story in it's entirety - I love Tamaki and Kyouya. But I'm sorry to say that as a French student, it's super obvious that you used Google Translate (some of the verbs were wrong, some grammar issues, etc). Honestly, I'd have liked it better it you'd just written what he was saying in English and italicised it or something like that. But as a whole, it was really good! Good job and keep writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() The only American ice skater I know is Johnny Weir, and God I love him! This is the first ice skating fic I've read! Good job really! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() for the love of everything tell me you did not put Johnny Weir in this story, please! I mean he is an amazing skateer and everything but he's so annoying! Please have it be some other nameless american ice skater that i should know but don't. please lol no offence Johnny... tee |
![]() ![]() I've got no idea who the figure skater is, but you seem to be the only person i can find who actually wrote a story about ice skating with EXCELLENT knowledge of the sport! I've recently picked my skates back up and have found it sooooo much fun, so I've been browsing for amazing skating fics, and nobody knows enough about it to actually make it readable to an avid figure skater... terrific job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Eeeeeeeeheeheeeee! x33 Loooove! :D Especially Tamaki's random French and the American skater! Very great fic! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OH MAN. Are you French or did you use Google translate? LOL. I LOVE THIS TO PIECES. 3 I love the mysterious man with green eyes, I love Tamaki's French, I love Kyouya's hidden worry and his greatness. ;O; |
![]() ![]() ![]() This si cute X) |