Please update! :)

Haha clever making Setsuna (pluto's)'s code name ninth because Pluto is the ninth planet. Mamoru is a jerk.

This story is really fun to read and I'm hooked. Chapter 5 through me for a loop. I had a feeling Setsuna was some kind of supernatural being in chapter four. Chapter four was a great chapter by the way. You really built suspense leading up to Usagi's acceptance of Setsuna's offer of adoption.

For chapter 5 my guess is that if I was familiar with the series and its characters, it would probably make perfect sense. But for people like me, if you rooted that scene in a familiar surrounding it may feel more grounded. Maybe it could play out while Setsuna is driving Usagi to her new home. Usagi could be playing with toys and stuff in the back car seat, while Setsuna is lost in thought about how time is such a tricky thing to manage.

Your writing is great and I'm really enjoying how this story is unfolding.

Wow - good. I'm two chapters in and each one is gripping. I don't know anything about the series, but you have found a way to make the Usagi character very sympathetic. Most little kid characters come off as annoying, but not here. She's clearly an intelligent, kind little kid. But not one of those smart alec - mini adults - a real kid.

Also - your emotion is generally understated. When she was crying in the hospital bed, you didn't pull out all the stops. I think it was more believable and it made the whole thing just that much more sad.

I like how you have started these first two chapters with a short sentence. It really pulls the reader in fast. You are great at describing scenes - you don't waste words, but still manage capture the most important pieces of what we need to know very well. I really felt like I was sitting next to Usagi on the side of the road watching her house burn.

I learned a lot from reading this, and look forward to checking out the other chapters.

There's another writer I particularly like "Heletherel." That author has a great Inuyasha story that you may like.

You clearly have a great deal of empathy for these characters and it shows in this work.

Oh no! You're really doing it ! I can't wait for the next chapter.

It's been four months and since you last updated, I'm glad your back. Great chapter, please update the next chapters soon and not in months. Keep it coming,

too bad your going to stop writing this story, but i will put it on watch in case you do continue it one day.

Thank you for the notice. I appreciate the snippets, as well.

I can understand where you're coming from. I entered fanfiction for similar reasons, and as things changed in my life, my desire to write such things rose and ebbed. I have written fanfiction only rarely over the last several years (as my account can attest), though I still read others' work.

I would hope that someday you return to complete this work, but in the meantime, I wish for you to enjoy your life, and things go well for you.

Ninth is Pluto, the NINTH planet in the solar system (though it isn't technically a planet anymore).
Is Luna and Artemis going to show up in this? (Along with Sailor V?)
Is Pluto going to reveal herself to Usagi?
I can't wait to read more and find out. Update soon!

I like it. I'll be keeping an eye on this one.

It's been five months and four weeks since you last updated, I'm glad your back. Great chapter, keep it coming. Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!

crazy Mamo-chan... this story is great...
i just wonder why the author didn't introduce Luna right off the bat as Usa's sidekick

Haha I love the 'we havent met her so she must be imaginary' lol.

I can't wait to see how this ends :D

Imaginary? What does Mamoru think is the truth? That Usagi lives by herself and makes up an imaginary mom to keep her company? That would be kind of sad. But Mamoru has his crazy ideas sometimes. And I thought that that voice was Luna, now I'm left wondering who "Ninth" is. Please update ASAP because this is one of my favorite stories and I really want to see what happens next.

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