Loved this story so much!

This is not the first story of yours that I have read, it I have read from your first story to this one. I love how you weaved the storylines with many others and twist them into a completely new story. I cannot say which of your stories is my favourite, I have fallen in love with your way of writing since I started reading your stories several weeks ago. Thank you so much for being such a amazing writer

Aww I loved this story! From beginning to extras at the end! It’s such a delight to read your stories! Even if it’s sad at the beginning. I love seeing them happy and hoping/knowing they will be eventually! Thank you!

WOMAN it is STUPIDLY difficult to put your writing down it is almost 2 am and I have to work today... a long shift too... sigh~ Keep up the phenomenal work.

The greatest thing about Author-chan's stories is that they are so amazing that they're worth re-reading them over and over. I had such a great time reading the is story again. Thanks for making such amazing for one of my favorite studio ghibli movies.

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I'm calling it now, Haru's going to be a sister

I TOTALLY CALLED IT!

I think that you should search for synanums for Horror, because you over use that word to the point of impracticality. I feel that the story would be much improved if you did so, with all your story's.

Oh, I adored the story with all my heart. I'm glad the ending turned out marvelous.

I actually kind of disagree with your beta. This chapter explained a lot of plot holes like how the universities got videos of haru's gymnastic abilities, who Emma the counselor is and her connection to Louise (because to be honest, when you mentioned her in the photos Haru got for her birthday, I had no idea who she was), and gives more depth to Haru's connection to Louise. And I was surprised that Haru's exam was built up so much just to have been resolved in a few sentences. With this chapter, I feel like that obstacle of her's was nicely resolved while showing a lot about Haru's gymnastic abilities

Also, what's up with your "Baron having a lot of fancy weapons" fetish lol. That's is in Refuge as well lol.

You have a thing for cheese graters... you mention them in Refuge too lol

I thought this was a new one... Until I read the first chapter... ;'(

This probably isn't the best place to submit story ideas, but since I don't have an account here, I'm not exactly spoiled for choices. I was just thinking that it might make a cool story to have a theater setting like your version of Phantom of the Opera, but where Haru is a normal actress in the company along with Baron, who has supernatural ties no one can know about. The theater decides to put on a production about a witch, casting Haru in the lead role, but can't figure out how to play her familiar until Baron says he can probably arrange for something, as long as the theater doesn't ask too many questions. Of course, later, a tawny cat shows up, and to the bafflement of the theater, follows its instructions perfectly...

Hope you don't think I'm being pushy! You can write this or not, of course, your choice, but I think you'd do a much better job of it than I would, so I thought I'd bring it to your attention. If you do decide to write it, feel free to change anything from the above that doesn't fit with your vision! This was only meant to be a suggestion, not a be all and end all request, and either way, you can fulfill it or not, in your own time. Your stories are wonderful, and I love reading them - keep up the good work, and thanks for reading this!