THAT was bellas goodbye? "You make me so smiley baby"

WTF?

Edwards POV is written like hes a woman. He thoughy god took his EX because he ...didn't deserve the love she showed him?...SERIOUSLY? WTF?

THAT is a lot of ghosts to take on, especially for a rebound. I'm kinda thinking that is WAY too much baggage for a college graduate that just got cheated on the day she was planning to marry someone else.

Edward had a kid with someone else? eww...no thanks.

wtf? "no eddie I don't speak French but I sing in, Russian, German, Latin, French, Chinese, Japanese, Spanish, Czech, and fucking sign language...you like?"

You just went alittle far ya know? And she sounded like a stuck up braggy cunt.

But, did you die? Cause it's shitty to leave folks hanging.

love it please write more

Just realized the contradiction, if Bella needs the photo for evidence why did she throw the phone away? Unless between leaving Whoreob's room and the hotel lobby she emailed it to herself.

Can you tell your blog name? Thanks

I really loved this story. Two bad life gets in the the way aand thing never get done. Thanx
Thanks again for writinting it.

Didn't Bella JUST say they were going to wait to get married so no one would think the pregnancy had something to do with it?

Hope you can continue this story! I didnt want to stop reading... It was really heartfelt.. I really LOVED this story :)

Hope you continue the story...I know it's been a bout a year but this is a good story.

Good story make new chapters

Love Charlie giving Edward the ring, and the proposal.

"I want so badly to be a good mother, and the fact that I have no frame of reference for that scares me shitless. I hope I am enough." - I think we all feel that way, or most of us.

Very yummy, sweet, and swoony way to end this story.

Thank you for writing and sharing this journey!