Love this. found myself chuckling a few times from Burt and Tyler's banter. would have liked to hear more on how Burt saves Tyler's butt, but great story.

good start...dialogue was believeable as was character action

Nice.

Hey

They'll feed them with rosalita's cattles?

Good you updated. Long time eh?

Sir! I'm A huge fan o' yours!can ya update this already i have been a huge fan i made an account just fo' ya!

Lol did you know spiders have an accute scence of smell to begin with?XD That's why they freak out if you spray perfume on them. Seriously, you need to see Eight Legged

Wait a minute! You get to be in the storie but not me? That hurts :(

Great story really interesting.

Glad El Blanco didn't eat Tyler. He must have had one bad stomach ache. :)

Glad you updated :) and there weren't any ocs or mary sues

:O OMIGOSH you stole Lulu's nickname lol. you had me terrified there for a moment, i thought you had actually decided to kill Tyler. like, kill kill. awesome story overall, now...go work on your others! or shall hurt you when we get back to school! ;P

:O You killed Tyler? How could you! :( evil woman...(btw your breaks aren't showing up...you either forgot them or they got erased. i know, the same thing happens to me)

Sorry I havnt reviewed on a while! But iv been busy but still hope to read more.