I really love your story! Sheryl is my favorite character and I'm reading her manga and I love how a complex character she is because of her hard past. Please update it soon.

sorry for my delay on my review but the two chapters were amazing actually I can picture on my head the faces between Sheryl and Alto an of course the tension between them and Ranka. I like this fic of yours very much and keep writing.

Ah, I see you found a good way to work in an answer to my question from Chapter One. Although I wonder if Sheryl is telling the full truth when she says she's still learning to fly because "I see even my publicity stunts through to completion." I have the feeling that her interest in learning to fly might also have something to do with an interest in a certain bishounen...

Anyhow, I'm enjoying this so far. Keep up the good work!

wow you pictured quite well sheryl. I love both of your fics. And of course I love that at the end Alto would always came home with his yousei. Congratulations for a very nice written fiction. Hoping soon to read another one from you.

I quite enjoyed this one. It was quite entertaining, especially the end line. I'm definitely interested in seeing where you're going to take this. Although I'm a bit unsure about Sheryl trying to become a valkyrie pilot. I don't really see her as being likely to sign up with SMS or something so why does she need to learn to pilot a fighter? Isn't that a bit overkill for recreational flying? And for that matter who's letting her pilot a fighter? I can think of some possible explanations myself but it's probably something that would be worth explaining.