Reviews for Fermi |
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![]() ![]() I really tried to read this, I really, really did but nothing is punctuated correctly and you spelt 'else' wrong |
![]() ![]() The spelling and grammatical errors bug me. (Probably because I'm in advanced English.) Despite that, I loved it. |
![]() ![]() Damn... It's a pity you didn't actually rewrite this, it had potential. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this plotline! the spelling and grammar errors are kind of annoying, but the story itself is AWESOME! Please continue! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hello. First things first. I just wanted to make sure you know or are aware of the fact that all of Chapter 2 is, in fact, underlined. Don't know if that was intentional or not, but it is a little bit distracting. Secondly, I LOVE THIS! An X-Files, Doctor Who crossover! With both of my favorite Doctors working together! What a treat! Honestly...I couldn't be more thrilled to be reading this and I just sort of stumbled onto it by accident...a very happy accident, as it were. And I just gotta have more...I mean, really...to quote the 11th Doctor in Vampires of Venice, "This is Christmas!" *Lets out girlish squee!* ~~Cat |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like it please continue:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like it please continue:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Timelord 88 thanks :D and i will update soon, probably in the next day or so |
![]() ![]() The 10th doctor is my favorite and I like how you started this story so far. I hope you decide to continue writing more chapters. |