So so sad... An so incredibly creepy dumb Ozai. My my my

Oh goodness. This is a little graphic, but I like appealing to a wide variety of audiences when I add things to my community. And this is a stunning piece of work!

This sucked me in the minute I laid eyes on it. I'm almost on the edge of tears. Her pain is just so real, I can feel it and my heart aches for her. Your imagery was fabulous as was your detail and use of subtle dialogue. The length was perfect. I didn't notice any errors, and even if there were, I was too caught up in the moment to care. Stories like this are captivating to anyone who reads them. I feel that if I read this again and again, I will get something new from it each time. It takes talent to write something like this.

Most of this has to do with your word choice. This is what impressed me most about this piece. I believe that my favorite line is "The secrets sunshine will reveal." Stunning. Absolutely gorgeous imagery, and you make it look so easy!

To sum things up, this is a very short review coming from me, and I apologize for that. I can only gush about the beauty of a fanfic such as this for so long, without the author getting bored or annoyed with me, that is. But yes, this is most definitely added to my community.

Keep writing and have a nice day,

~Summer

Oh my goodness. That was so, so sad. Not a very "merry" Christmas present, but a wonderful piece nonetheless. It was extremely well-written and very emotional. The imagery wasn't too graphic, which I appreciated, and the song lyrics were fantastic.

Thank you for this -