SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL. Please :DD

I am heartbroken; but one truth penetrates my pain, the fact that Reid's decision is wrong.

"Stars exploded beneath his eyelids." They pretty much exploded in front of mine too. Great ... (insert your own adjective here) job.

All of life's heartfelt moments are softly spoken.
"Stay."
I rest my case.

Deep love is developing in my chest for artfully naughty Benmona and the deliciously duped LuRe.
You have a very engaging and fluid writing style.

I'm seriously falling in love with Ben.
Great writing.

I think I've developed my latest crush, Ben is a fantastic original character. I hope he helps Luke open his eyes, to the new opportunity that is currently staring him in the face.

Excellent start.
Excellent chemistry.
I especially like the carefully interwoven bits of canon.

Great story, i loved it.
Thanks for sharing.

Good concept, but try to be more original, don't use too many lines from the series yeah?

this was a really good story, i loves it! :)

Just finished your story! Could not stop reading it, fantastic job! Al the characters worked. I am really looking forward to a sequel!

Couldn't stop reading. Loved it. The Ben character added a lot of fun. It was great to see how you used LuRe's gestures, looks and lines. (One I missed is "One is not such a low number") So, a sequel? I'll be looking forward to it.

Just finished the last two chapters. Ugh...I am going to miss this fanfic so much. It was one of the few really good Reid and Luke stories. Can't wait for the sequel. You did an awesome job.