Reviews for To Be A Master
Smartyul chapter 3 . 6/27
Technically 7 man team, since before it would have been a 4 man team, meaning it included the sensei.
kristinalprime23 chapter 29 . 6/15
when is chapter 30 coming out?
Guest chapter 16 . 6/11
You know it would be better if there is no romance
ahagiu chapter 29 . 5/28
Holy crap this story is amazing. I only discovered it a few days ago, ant it is a thrilling ride. Please update! I have seen you have been working on other fics and this one is so good I just can't stand to see it die in the last updated in Feb 2019 void.
Wargensnack chapter 29 . 3/12
Is anyone else expecting an appearance from Arceus by the end of the fic? Like the actual Arceus, not a transformed Naruto.
Dav009 chapter 29 . 3/1
Love the story I look forward to reading more soon. But I’m also hoping for his team to find some real Pokémon.
Silverwingzz chapter 16 . 2/14
Forgot to mention that as long as your skilled at the gentle fist style, you can see tenketsu easily. “Particularly skilled users of the Byakugan can take the Gentle Fist style one step further. Along the keirakurei are 361 pinprick-sized nodes called tenketsu, or chakra points, which only the more skilled users can see.”Byakugan is the only one that can see tenketsu even if you can’t hit it if your not good you can still see it.
Silverwingzz chapter 12 . 2/14
So you took down 10 teams? That’s just gonna make the exam shorter than in canon.
pepejohn chapter 5 . 1/30
Is it just me or does this read a bit stiffly? It's still good otherwise.
HyperA2019 chapter 29 . 12/12/2019
I am looking foward to Chapter 30 and Naruto should use Celebi's time travel ability to travel into the past to obtain three more Pokemon.
Sage of the Azure Phoenix chapter 14 . 10/18/2019
Great chapter.

My only thing is how Temari practically won her match. The match was over anyway you look at it, so why didn't Hayate call the match? It makes what happened to Naruto meaningless, since all he did was destroy Temari's fan, even if it had value. I'm not saying it was right, but measures like that have to happen in order for the one commiting the act to fall hard. Also, don't forget Tenten's livelyhood was on the line, so how does Temari walking away scott free seem fair?
OmegaUltima chapter 29 . 10/6/2019
Loving this so far, looking forward to seeing more, hopefully soon, but I do have a couple of questions/concerns...

1. Are you going to be incorporating Mega-Evolutions into the fic? If not having Naruto's party "luckily" find surviving Mega Stones for his starters, he could always just transform directly into them, like Ditto/Mew can, right? Especially since (at least some) of the Megas have had Pokedex entries, so he could learn of them that way

2. Is the Kyuubi/Kurama not ever going to even have a cameo appearance at some point? They're kind of a major thing for the Naruto series to just completely gloss over like they have been; heck, they could just help provide the energy for the MAJOR Legendaries (by which I mean the ones in control of the fundamental forces of the world, ie Dialga, Palkia, (Primal) Groudon/Kyogre, etc)

3. Speaking of, really looking forward to that class of Legendary to be brought in to the story~
Ti Light chapter 29 . 10/6/2019
Please post the next chapter soon!
Guest chapter 29 . 10/2/2019
Please continue. It s great story.
lou2003us chapter 29 . 9/20/2019
I really want to see what happens next. Looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the great work!
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