I loved that story.

Really enjoyed this story. Just a note FYI - when patients share a hospital room typically there is a curtain pulled between them during exams and procedures, so privacy and “seeing more of each other than they ever wanted to” would not be an issue. Thanks for sharing this story and especially for NOT turning it into slash. I absolutely hate when writers go that direction - it is not who our CM characters are!

Hehe, Emergency I see what you did there. Good show.

Really? A cougar in the Mountains?
But otherwise a good story

Great story! And good ending :)

Love the story, Emily is right about spencer ;)

Okay, first of all: I LOVE your story so far! I love the idea and the writing style you've used. I haven't noticed any errors that would normally irritate me, and I just... I just love it.

Second, that idea of a killer on board is the best. I was worried enough about that wild animal, but a killer? No freaking way! Surprises, surprised: that's exactly what keeps me reading.

Amazingly well done! This story is now literally in my top 3.

Love it!

Jesus! I can't read this for more than a few minutes at a time before I start having phantom broken-pelvis. It literally makes me squirm and apply pressure

Good story!

Enjoyed
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Love the odd people showing up. I used to watch Emergency! all the time and had a crush on Johnny. My only complaint is if you had Steve McGarrett you should have Danny also. No, offense, but Danny is sexy!

hey
your story is great, I really enjoy reading it. Especially beating the crap out of the favorite character as you say, is something I want to read.
But at this point I wanted to note some thoughts.
It doesn't make sense, that Hotch is able to get up. After what I read, his condition must be as bad as Reid's. I have the impression you concentrate too much on Reid and forget what happened to Hotch. He had a severe head injury, you wrote he hat a pupil difference, that is life threatening. So at this point of the story it seems that Hotch has some broken bones and injuries regarding the beating. But he got hit on the head so hard, that he was not able to think straight. He had the pupil difference, which indicate a bleeding or a brain swelling. To my knowledge he had to be at least unconscious for the most of the time. You wrote also he had trouble to breathe because of the broken ribs, that is also severe.
Summarized he is in no condition to move or even stand.
I don't want to talk your story or yourself down. This is just what I thought the last two chapters and I wanted you to know. Because you're a great author :)

I thought that was a really sweet ending :3
AWESOME STORY

Aw poor Hotch