Reviews for Serenity
buriedalive55 chapter 2 . 4/1/2011
I loved this fic. I like that you used canon concepts and ideas in AH. I liked getting Bella's POV through her e-mails. I can't believe it took me so long to read this. I wish I'd read it sooner because it's amazing.
montannaleigh chapter 2 . 2/2/2011
awesome finish :)
twimom143 chapter 2 . 1/30/2011
Love this a lot! Please write Jasper and Alice's story, that would be enlightening as well!
twimom143 chapter 1 . 1/30/2011
Very well written and captures the attention without missing a beat!
pledge520 chapter 2 . 1/29/2011
Your story did taught us a story, i think. I am glad there is other stuff other than love at first sight:)

Cry so hard, and now I have to sleep. Night
drotuno chapter 2 . 1/29/2011
Just WOW! Really well done. I'm still reeling from this short story, actually. Thank you for sharing...for writing about addiction, a topic that I don't think anyone can truly understand unless they KNOW someone with it. No matter the addiction, it's pure hell for all parties involved.

Thank you again...
BooYahIt'sRIYA chapter 2 . 1/28/2011
This is one of the best stories I've read & it's only 2 chapters long! It definitely deserves more reviews! Great plot, love the emotion & characters!
claire163rd.com chapter 2 . 1/27/2011
Freaking wonderful story. Extremely well-written, no complaints whatsoever! Cried through the whole second chapter, damm you!
twilightmom1 chapter 2 . 1/27/2011
That was so amazing! I really have no words!
twilightmom1 chapter 1 . 1/27/2011
Wow! That was amazing! These poor guys! He has gone through so much! I wonder what her reaction will be when he comes back!
bemily chapter 2 . 1/27/2011
Wow. I loved the canon birthday party feel and Edward's struggle. His leaving and her forgiving felt like real and not just for the sake of the story. That didn't even make sense, but in my head it does. I loved that she kept the connection through emails and even though she didn't know it, he felt it by reading them and knowing she was waiting.

I hope you have a multi-chapter planed.
Slutty Mouse chapter 1 . 1/27/2011
at last a story dealing with heroin addiction. as an ex addict my self i have always wanted to write a story like this but i feel it would be to hard to write.

i think you have delt with this issue perfectly.

your welcome to get in toutch.

respect
scarletoctopus chapter 2 . 1/27/2011
Really goof story. Thank for sharing your words.
bmango chapter 2 . 1/27/2011
Wow. This was stunning. Thank you for sharing and my only wish is that it was longer. :) -b
henbi chapter 2 . 1/27/2011
such an amazing and hopeful story and really beautifully written. thank you for sharing :)
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