I tried to read this, but I can't even go on anymore. All of those fucking unneeded romanized words have repelled me. If you want to write in Japanese, write in CORRECT Japanese, meaning with actual Japanese characters, and submit this story's language as Japanese. But until then, stop being a fucking japanese-tard with your head shoved up some japanese ass.

nice! I finally finished it

I love this story and have read it several times. I beg you to write a sequel, your writing is amazing!

Hahahah I remember reading this fic years and years ago. Has it really been like 10 years? I've always remembered this one! Imagine the surprise to see it finally finished. AMAZING WORK!

So...sequal?

Sequel please, please please please. We need a Xellina revival. 3 Thank you for finishing!

Wow I really wan't to read thee final chapter. This is truely one of the BEST fanfiction that I've ever read(and trust me, I've read alot), and one of the few that actually made me laugh while reading it. The Humor in this story is really amazing, and you also wrote the character very well! I also love how Xellos and Lina interact when in each other's presence!

I really wan't to read the ending, and I'm hoping that Xellos and Lina will have a happy ending!

Someday, somewhere in the near future...I hope that you'll finish this story...

_O Sheesh. Xellos seems to pop up everywhere. Knew that kid was suspicious. Love the chapter.

Love it XD Xellos sure is mysterious.

Wow. How intense. XD

Hahaha Love how she suddenly took off like that XD

Nice. The Japanese words were kind of hard to follow (but I recognize some thanks to some anime I've watched). The only thing that's stopping Lina from working for Xellos is the prison food XD (which I find really funny and not really that surprising).

Hey, are you EVER gonna finish this? I don't mean to be rude or rush you but could you at least indicate if you even plan to update this at all? I don't mind waiting, I just don't want to wait for no reason. So please let me know because I really love the story and your writing style.

This story is so unbelievably good, but you break my heart not updating! ;_;

continue with the story. this is getting interestiing. I want ot see what Xellos plan is. I am also curious at what Zel was hinting at. Does Zel have feelings for Lina? Does Xellos hve feelings for Lina? What is Lina's feeling on all of this? What is Lina's reasing for going back to Xellos? Please post the next chapter, because I really like this story.