Excellent story, I really enjoyed this! Characters were well done.

I enjoyed this. Thanks.

3 or 4 years ago Robin would have been in the Holy Land, not pulling a rapist off a girl in England.

Jesus, I'm crying, seriously, I've loved every second of this, from the start to the end. Lovely story. Poor Will, and nice Robin, and amazing villain. I've loved the focus on the relationship between the brothers and the characters, very very very close to the movie, even better than those. Now, I know it's been quite some time since you wrote this, but, I hope you will do more of these precious stories! Thankyouuuuuuu!

Wow! What an amazing story! One of the best things I've ever read in my life. And I loved every single phrase. Brilliant plot, great characters; every word, every action's at its place. A really wonderful job you did!

Interesting story! This Crawford guy is nuts! Also, considering that Will's "F*** me, he cleared it" was left in after Christian Slater ad-libbed it, I think Crawford calling him kid would work.

Such a wonderfully gruesome story! I love strong/vulnerable Will and caring/imperfect Robin. You wrote a great story here!

It was a really great story. I love Robin and Will stories because I'm a huge Will Scarlett fan. I was so afraid Will would die, but I'm happy, he survived. He's strong, stronger than anyone. He just has to believe in himself.

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Not good at writing fight scenes? That was amazing!

I loved it so much. You should write more stories. Hey, also, if you had killed Will, I WOULD HAVE HUNG YOU WITH YOUR OWN SHOELACES! JK...maybe...

ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT! You are so evil and you are awesome! Best Robin Hood Fanfiction EVER!

i think you should write a nother story like this but add some humer. That was a great story i love. I am a will girl.

Cool start - could really imagine something like that happening Cant wait to read more!

Wow! What a roller-coaster ride this was! You did a wonderful job with both Robin's and Will's tendency to speak first and think about it later. You successfully got into both main characters' minds and dealt with the angst beautifully. I read the story straight through unable to stop until I got to the end. I loved chapter 12 and the brothers finally coming to an understanding.

The results of the torture for both of them...Robin having nightmares (and Will's surprise to learn that) and Will's inability to handle being touched (even accidentally or casually) were a great addition to the story. This incident could have long standing repercussions for both characters.

You handled Azeem well, too. He was very much in character, and his inability to be too honest with Robin saying only that he would do his best to help Will was a good touch. His reaction to Will's injuries was absolutely believable.

Excellent job.