you could do better. but keep trying

Oh. So cute. I hope Scorpius was having the same kind of dreams too. ;)

It was written well and gives a distinct feel to how you perceive Al's character; I wish there was a continuation.

A nice read!

I had issues attempting to read this due to lack of proof-reading. There are several parts where I believe you missed a word or parts where you forgot the tense of a word, or you just made up words.

I suppose that won't bother everybody but I couldn't get past the first paragraph without being horrified. So, if you want someone to take your stories seriously, you're going to have to either proof-read or have someone you know do it.

I loved it! I would love to see more Albus/ Scorpious fanfics from you, your writing is phenomenal:)

Good job, look forward to your other stories.

i would have liked if this was multi-chaptered...but no matter..i will look out for your other al/scor fics for sure!it was interesting! :)

This was written really well !

I enjoyed it :)