Reviews for Learning to Stand
jaconda chapter 1 . 6/29/2014
About Breakfast at the end of the world. It got many things about Doctor Who wrong.
Liliyana chapter 2 . 2/21/2013
PLEASE UPDATE SOON! IT'S BEEN LIKE TWO YEARS SINCE THE LAST UPDATE! I HOPE YOU ARE NOT DEAD OR INJURED IN ANY WAY! UPDATE PLEASE SOON PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! (oh, and if you wouldn't mind, could I please get some Ameripan? Please?) THANK YOU FOR YOUR TIME!
THIS IS LILIYANA, OVER AND OUT!
-Liliyana
DEmpress chapter 2 . 2/12/2013
Interesting AU. I'm interested in what happens next, so don't abandon the poor story here! Still, thank you for publishing what you did write.
under green ice chapter 2 . 7/30/2011
awesome story so far keep up the good work and update soon! I fell bad for Liechtenstein getting separated from her brother like that and Vash must be freaking out and going insane worrying about her.

It makes me wonder if a disease like this could some how spread to Australia and north and south America as well as other smaller Island countries in the world(assuming the that they aren’t already infected). But if it did I would imagine it would take a bit of time to spread so far that it reached across the ocean.
Doitsu's Storyteller chapter 1 . 6/22/2011
I am a huge fan of anything that has something to do with zombies and I must say this fic really hit the mark! I do have a fondness for Germany/Italy romance so you can imagine my suprise and happiness when I stumbled upon this lovely fic~

You described the setting perfectly and explained the situation and the chaos that was slowly but surely unraveling. And you described the chaos. Families being torn apart, people being left behind and every car becoming full. At first I was expecting Italy or Prussia offering to be left behind but Germany made the choice before they did.

WOOT! I'm loving this! Please update soon!:)
Mtsr chapter 2 . 6/21/2011
Ej:*hugs*THANK YOU THANK YOU SOOOOOO MUCH!

So,im super glad you added miss lily,because I havent seen her in alot of fanfictions,so score fer yer..

*cough*JapanXAmerica*cough*

fir meh?o.o

SOON AWAITING FOR SUMPTIN AWSOME,

Ej,Meow the Secret Review
Lili and RayRay chapter 2 . 6/21/2011
OMG YOU'RE ALIVE! Thanks for updating! X3
Mtsr chapter 1 . 2/4/2011
Lovely,i cant wait for part two!

Ôn my devian Resident-chicklol im having this thing where i talk about 2 FANFICTIONS every week ,and your this weeks!.
Alya Queen Of Light chapter 1 . 2/1/2011
I love it!
Lili and RayRay chapter 1 . 1/30/2011
This is cool!

It kind of reminds me of the movie I Am Legend (which, sad to say, I got nightmares from). I can't wait to read more! :D

I hope Germany and Italy find each other one day~
Nikkormat chapter 1 . 1/30/2011
Overall, the plotline was interesting. But you need to show more, not tell. (we did this In Millers class, when we selected a feeling, and had to write about an experience where we felt it, but weren't allowed to use the wrod itself..) You did that somewhat, but you dont need to use 'describing words' (dont know technical term) before it. like here:

' Never before had he felt such a raw heartache, almost as though his heart had been gouged out of his chest with a rusty spoon, leaving an empty vacuum in its place.' you dont necessarily need 'almost as though' you could say 'Never before had he felt such a heartache, the pain so raw and deep that it swept the air from his aching lungs.' Senses! use the five senses to paint a picture for the reader. it makes the story come alive so much more. Make me/readers feel like were living it. or something... i like the slash though 3