| Reviews for Her Story: Philosopher's Stone |
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  Guest chapter 8 . 6/21 I hope she holds up to that. Sometimes, "I told you so," is much better when you don’t tell them repeatedly and just look at them. |
 Ascen chapter 21 . 5/2/2019 Finished... and loved it. Ahh, this sucks so muchjust sitting back and waiting for stories to continue just makes you want to punch a brick wall, except in this circumstance, it makes you want to punch a lion (no offensemeaning that it was really good and I want to read more of this story. This story was great and just hoping (commanding) you complete all 7 years and not give up. I'm really looking forward to Prisoner of Azkaban and Goblet of Fire but that'll have to wait, which I can do... hopefully. |
| Ascen chapter 19 . 5/2/2019 Page 19 a good ways downshould beHarry went rigid behind Hermione." |
| Lillylarlar chapter 21 . 10/1/2018 Oooh she reckonised the Dursleys! Looking forward to year 2 and their time at the burrow. That was really done exceptionally well. It was original but fit the story well! |
| Lillylarlar chapter 20 . 10/1/2018 I think her reaction was very believable. Can’t beleive it’s nearly the end of the 1st book. Wish there was more than half the second though |
| Lillylarlar chapter 19 . 9/30/2018 There was an error in it but I can’t rememver so I doubt it was that important! It’s getrubg so exciting now. Looking forward to Karen and Lindsey’s oppinion! |
| Lillylarlar chapter 18 . 9/30/2018 Ooh exciting stuff. Very silly of them to leave the cloak! I doubt Hermione would ah we forgotten really! You made a typo and used Hagrid instead of Norbert when they left Hagrid at the buy and put be cloak over he cage! |
| Lillylarlar chapter 17 . 9/29/2018 I hope that this sentiment is still true! That you’ll never give up on her story. It’s my new favourite. |
| Lillylarlar chapter 16 . 9/29/2018 I like your new spell! I didn’t think I recognised it. Will Fay see the note? I know what those girls are like with not opening their books! |
| Lillylarlar chapter 15 . 9/29/2018 The pace is perfect and the interaction between all of the characters fits really well. It baffles me how they don’t find Quirrell to be shady! |
| Lillylarlar chapter 14 . 9/28/2018 Loved Harry’s “please don’t” re Oliver kissing Hermione! |
| Lillylarlar chapter 13 . 9/28/2018 I had a few laughs in this one! I don’t want the series to end! |
| Lillylarlar chapter 12 . 9/28/2018 Uh oh Sally Anne seems like hard work! It’s not even October but... happy Christmas! I’m feeling festive |
| Lillylarlar chapter 11 . 9/28/2018 The date on this chapter was wrong, it was short and sweet though. Hope Mrs P is ok |
| Lillylarlar chapter 10 . 9/28/2018 Looking forward to Hermione going home to see what she tells her parents! I really am enjoying her story! |
