please continue this story

Ahhh! I need more the suspense is killing me! I love your writing style it's so fluid and full of personality!

Just so you know, I read all of the last story and this one tonight and I LOVE THEM! That being said, why have you not continued this one? It has been nealy two years, and such a crual cliffhanger as well! Please resume this story! I want to know what happens!

Awesome fic. I really like Edith and Jonathan, and I'm dying to know what will happen now that the orphanage has burned down.

Great Story! Please Update soon!

Gr8 story quick question, is edith older or younger?

wow

When are you going to have a new part for this story updated. I'm eager to see what happends next.

~Hannah

Reading this chapter, all I could think of was the line from the beginning of Toy Story 3, "Oh no! The orphans!" LOL Great chapter. I look forward to more!

the orphanage burnt down? :O

at least no one was hurt :S

ooh and was is some sort of plan to get Eugene and Edith to see Lord Herbert?

Poor Edith! Please update soon, this is getting really good XP

omg I wanna know what happens!

Funny you should mention Eugene having a half-sister. I'm planning on a rewrite of the movie with Flynn having a sister named Marian and her alias being Ella Rider.

Yay! Great chapter! Jonathon is intriguing and I think it's very believable how Flynn would be jealous of how he could've had that life. Nevertheless, I hope they become friends. He can teach him the Smolder to use on Edith LOL Can't wait for more!

Another AU fanfic... I get those a lot. I have one in the works myself. It is actually quite tricky, because mine deviates from the film too soon for two major plot lines to be worked out... it causes for some interesting chase. lol. I should work on that this weekend... It's a long fanfic! lol.

I know that feeling though. Too many in the head at once. I get overwhelmed! But it'll work out in the end! Don't worry about updating too fast or what not. Just write when you can write. :)

This was an interesting chapter. Waiting for more - but I'm always waiting. lol.

Oh, and... okay, this is after Flower Glow. I'm wondering... does Eugene and Rapunzel still have their physical problems? Because it doesn't come up much... or at all... and I know this is focused on Edith, and their stupid of a father *I hate him... no offense*, and well, it is leading into Lord Jonathan... just wondered.

:P

Yay, the imagery I'm getting from this fic is really good. I can completely see everything that's happening, thankyou! Please continue and update soon! :3