hahahaha the ending was so funny roxy such perv what about kairi hert broken hahahahaha i would like to see that

Sequel! I demand one! I want to see Kairi's reaction to this and stuff! I DEMAND ONE! Loljk. Just write whatever you feel like writing... Though if you were to write a sequel then... ;)

Ha. I couldn't kill you for writing this, it's actually not bad at all. I like it a lot. It's really great for your first lemon. The last paragraph was a cute touch as well.

i just realise roxas didn't get to reales

should he have blue balls lol

over all it was cuti feel sorry for kairi when

she finds out

AWW that was just the cutest!

and the lemon was well written- you should write more!

*im huggled up with my friends pup oogiling this XD*

but seriously, love the end quote too XD

Hey, you writing is amazing. It made me very happy.

And I have the same exact problem! Read all these lemon but the minute I start writing something...

But anyway, good luck with your writing.

"Hey Rox, can I tell you a secret?"

"Sure, what is it?" I ask, raising an eyebrow.

Grinning, I'm thrown off when Sora suddenly presses his lips to mine, moving our mouths slowly. He pulls away and winks. "I've liked you since seventh grade." And before I can say anything he's skipping down the hall. I stand there, frozen, my lips turning into the biggest grin ever. I have to control myself from screaming 'YES!' and dancing around the room.

the ending was my favorite(: i can't really think of anything else to say about this besides AWWWWW. c: great job!

You shouldn't be embarrassed, this was wonderfully done (I especially loved the pairing)! I hope that you continue writing (with or without lemon) as your skill is exceedingly evident. Great job and keep up the good work, I can't wait to see what you'll come out with next!

I'm liking this! XD So, there'll be more? Coz I'm not seeing any 'completed' here. If so, I'm alerting dis. :D

~~AI~~

aaaaw i love it! good job, is this a finished story? because it doesnt say complete or else i should alert this story :D

I really enjoyed this, Abby. It made me go AWW like five times, and I only say one writing error. Good work! Write more! _

This . . . . Is actually quite good for a first time O_o not the lemon (well yes, that to) But the story is well-made.

That was really good for a first time Lemon Abby, I think that maybe you could add maybe a little more panicking, lols, jk

From Sora aka Paige xD