Reviews for Among The Hawks And Doves
Lady Logos chapter 5 . 8/17
Excellent story so farFinally we have a Dark Harry that isn't all doom and gloom and angst. Also finally someone doing Naruto correctly as per canon. Do like and can recommend!
lilgarcia999999 chapter 3 . 8/2
I love the contrast in their view of of harry bc naruto thinks hes like a scary gruff ninja who talks harsh but is actually really nice and harrys like omg is this okay and god i was so mean to him i didnt mean to be so harsh and he tries hard not to fidget and get embarrassed or nervous
tigerslady08 chapter 9 . 6/15
I find it sad that this and the hp/ black butler was abandoned. I enjoy rereading them, mistakes and all. And this one always makes me grin. Take care.
Guest chapter 2 . 5/24
...yeah...no. read some comments about what happens in some of the chapters and I have to say its a hard NO for me. Its too bad because the first 2 chapter were interesting...
deathwearsblack chapter 9 . 11/15/2019
please update.
cielo2016 chapter 4 . 10/6/2019
I think the word chimera just be listened as chimera because of the word chimera , that have been on hiraganaちめらand katakanaチメラ )
Alara Phoenix chapter 9 . 9/11/2019
Daaaaamn this is really good. I kind of went into it blind, having only glanced at the summary and I completely expected it to be some sort of one shot focusing entirely on the torture, then Harry forgiving Ibiki, and them falling in love, etc, etc, which, would have been fine, but also would've been one stick short of boring.

Instead I find myself reading something with a completely different twist than anything I've read before, and eight more pages than I was expecting (because I'm an idiot who doesn't check first). This story is brilliant and I've loved every bit of it so far, so kudos to you! Here's to hoping you continue it at some point in the future. Thanks for writing!
s f chapter 9 . 8/30/2019
Please wright more as love story line
Pein'sbabgirl chapter 9 . 5/4/2019
This fanfic pisses me off, where is the rest?
sapphire-lynx-angel chapter 9 . 5/1/2019
author-san please please please pick this story back up. Such an awesome story. One of my all time favs.
Guest chapter 9 . 1/4/2019
KEEP WRITING PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ
SilentSnowLeopardNinja chapter 9 . 12/26/2018
Damn. I was hoping Hinata would be "adopted" too with her little sister. Being called a baby bug just seems insulting. I hope you continue this some day, it's super interesting. And at the rate Harry is going he might need to open a daycare center or something lol.
SilentSnowLeopardNinja chapter 8 . 12/26/2018
Wait...what kind of bond was form just from him eating a placenta? And how was it formed?
SilentSnowLeopardNinja chapter 7 . 12/26/2018
Well...that was interesting. Is it possible that Naruto will have a rivalry friendship with Ino?
SilentSnowLeopardNinja chapter 6 . 12/26/2018
Actually Danzo the Hokage doesn't have to explain shit to anybody. Anywho I'm disappointed by this show of mercy Harry has to an enemy that not only tortured him and removed his eye but sought him out to torture him some more when her superiors ordered against it now that he's been made a comrade thanks to Naruto. Like...I was expecting her to get far more damage if not be killed and then used as an example/warning to solidify to the rest of the village that he's not playing any games. The way this played out and how Anko is apparently determined to try again just makes witnessing Harry's "revenge" unsatisfying. Also did he not realize he had another watcher? If not then why not? He can sense or spot anyone else so far without any issues...on another note is his eye just not gonna get healed/regrown or reattached to his socket?
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