this is so kawaii and smexy at the same time! /

"And Red stays." OH THANK FUCK
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I think I'm dead
Your writing style is really immersive, you are a very talented writer- merging present and past structures as you do :) It's good narration
plus also the fucking angst because I love this pairing and you write it so well thank you much

I am sooo sad that this is not AO3. I want to leave kudos! Grrrr :)

In the end Green was able to make him stay. xD I loved this.

Cute. :D Very, very cute.

"My ego says thanks, but that's not the point." - Oh, Green, you witty rascal you.

Ahaha, comical ending :D

3 3 3
So unique.

Wow, awesome story. I like the repetition with the whole "Red leaves" over and over and "Red stays" at the end :)

It's a pefect mix of fluff, violence, and a tiny bit of angst. All in all it is really good!

Luv the ending! XDDD

GREEN'S UKE! YES! 33333333 8DDDDDDDD

Keep it up! 8DDDDD

That...was very humorous and hot. I enjoyed it immensely.

Wake me up before you go-go! Don't leave me hanging like a yo-yo!

OH EM GEE Lol

I've favourited a lot of your stories lately, and I thought it was time I actually reviewed :) I love the tone of of all your stories, and how you portray Green and Red especially, getting across their distinct personalities and the dynamic of their relationship without any of the excessive 'tell' that tends to spoil stories. I admire the subtle way you deal with their separate issues especially, and it set my sister and I to discussing them for quite a while! Keep writing, please!

so much love hate XD i love it!