Interesting story and fun to read, especially ending with those three together, definitely means trouble for everyone. Thanks for sharing.

I never really watched 24, but I really enjoyed this story. The ending, with the introductions, made me grin. That Bauer would have the gene, too, was a surprise but I'm sure Sheppard wouldn't mind the extra help!

What about CH2?

Love 24 stories. Would love to see more

This is very good. Please write a sequel.

Great story, you should turn this into a longer story, or write a multi chapter sequel.

Interesting. Would make more sense if at the beginning you told us when Jack Bauer was a traitor. I've never seen 24.

Good story, it was very entertaining and though it was complete and a stand alone, I think it could be the start of either a larger short story, a novella, or a novel. Keep it around and someday revisit it. You may find you want to rework some of it and maybe expand the story.

I love it. Jack and Jack driving John crazy.