Reviews for The Fire of the Sun
eadart chapter 24 . 8/14
I have book grief nowthat special grief of finishing a book that you were so wrapped up in, you just can't stop thinking about it.
Thank you so much.
Guest chapter 25 . 8/9
I’m crying over Charlie omg. I hate to say that I wish Edward’s family wasn’t portrayed as basically antagonists of the story. They loved Bella so much. But I don’t think Edward would’ve came back. I think he would’ve mostly just watched from the side lines to make sure she was safe with Jacob. I don’t think he would’ve interfered. Cuz he wanted her to live a human life. (Well he didn’t realize he wanted her to pick Jacob until Eclipse) but I just hate that Alice and Edward were portrayed as... horrible people. I love this imprinting story though. And oh, how I honestly just hate Leah more than I already did. I feel sorry for her, but she was annoyingggg. And Emily. Oh I love Emily. That sweet angel. And I’m so happy that Jessica wasn’t left out. I’m happy she had more light in the story. I’ve always been a Team Edward, but I’ve fallen in love with Jacob in this story. So beautifully written. I read both story’s in 1 day. I haven’t slept. Lmao. You getting into the details of the tribe was so needed. I can’t hate Stephanie Meyer because she made me love these books so much. But we all needed more, and Stephanie didn’t deliver. But you did. Thank you so much.
secretfunnelcake chapter 24 . 8/6
I know that writing fanfic for twilight is bittersweet (I read all your authors notes lol) but this one and the one before are are just *chefs kiss*. Like. I reread twilight recently as like a test to see how they stood up compared to when I read them in junior high and ironically...I enjoyed myself immensely. I’m ashamed of myself but there it is. But you write the second half of the story the way that Meyers DEFINITELY should have. La Push and the wolves and there culture and the love triangles and yada yada yada we’re completely underutilized by her as plot. You completely crushed the story. I’m most fascinated by the Paul crush and would love a side fic based solely on that tbh. This all to say, this is my favorite fanfic lol. Not sure if that would make you happy or make you hate me but it’s out there and I’m planning on rereading all your twilight stuff again soon. Immediately. This weekend probably. So thank you!
aliaannette chapter 7 . 8/3
for the record, i’m here and it’s 2020... and the twilight movies are still garbage but not as garbage as the books. this inspired me to find someone who knew what to do with a plot and then i found you so thank GOD
Guest chapter 7 . 7/28
present
AnnaliseKav chapter 22 . 7/16
I’m sorry but crying my eyes out at 2:00am trying to bite my finger so my family doesn’t hear WASNT on my list of things to do today
didibooze chapter 24 . 7/1
I'm laying in my bed crying. All I can say is thank you. I'll come back here often.
Guest chapter 24 . 6/30
Okay so I completed both TMOTE and TFOTS in 2 days. I got HOOKED and therefore I didn't rest until I devoured every single word of this fanfic. I was so annoyed by how Bella went back to Edward in the original story but this fic right here gave me the alternative I sorely needed. The Sam voice was something that I never thought I needed but it was SO awesome. The deaths were very sad but it is so much more realistic than what Meyer portrayed so it's understandable. Life is not always rainbow and sunshine. I cannot thank you enough for creating such a wonderful alternative to Meyer's hot garbage.
Britt chapter 24 . 6/24
Earlier today (I guess it’s technically yesterday now, as I stayed up all night reading these fantastic fics), I searched “Jacob and Bella fanfics” and the title of your first intrigued me the most. I didn’t put down my phone until I finished. I scanned greedily through your really long author’s note, hoping against hope for the sequel I stayed up all night to read.

Thank you, sincerely, for empowering Bella and giving her the ending and the partner she deserves. I read the Twilight series initially when I was 17, after being dumped by my high school sweetheart (a somewhat controlling and verbally abusive boy, not entirely dissimilar from Edward Cullen). Of course, back then, I saw Edward’s return to Bella as a great triumph. Their story distracted me from my own pain at the time, and though I knew as I aged that the books weren’t really very good, they always held a special place in my heart for that reason. I recently cleaned out my bedroom at my parents’ house and decided to reread them. I am currently thirty, and after a few years of therapy I thankfully learned how to see the red flags of abusive, controlling men before I continued to end up in relationships with them. I spent this entire, most recent time rereading the Twilight series internally screaming at Bella to RUN AWAY FROM EDWARD AND NEVER LOOK BACK.

Never did I dream that a person could’ve come up with such a satisfying alternative ending where although Bella still loses a great deal, she gains confidence and respect. The pain that Jacob feels over her being bound to him is the exact opposite of how Edward exploits his pull over Bella, and it was phenomenal to see her choose wisely. Thank you so much for writing it. This is the ending I’ll remember. ️
Guest chapter 24 . 6/15
Bless you.
futurecullen26 chapter 24 . 5/18
I still can't. I love a happy ending though. Even if it's not as happy as I wanted it cause I'm still screaming about Sam and Quil. Phew. But this was amazing. Omg. I just... Love the real emotions I'm feeling. This definitely make the original Twilight look like a cheap knockoff, like the kind of bootleg that messed up the logo it's so bad. Wow
futurecullen26 chapter 22 . 5/18
I can't.
futurecullen26 chapter 21 . 5/18
Oh Quil
futurecullen26 chapter 20 . 5/18
I don't... I can't... I wish this had been the original Twilight. The drama, the danger, the stress. Oof
futurecullen26 chapter 16 . 5/18
Gahhhh omg Sam. I cannot. Oof I can't. I'm stressed
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