I hope you are able to finish this story. It is a good start.

Great story, but a bit lengthy for one chapter. Maybe try breaking it up a little to make it easier to read and enjoy. Looking forward to the next chapter :)

Love it

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Hi :) I really love your story ! You are very talentend et I hope to see more of your writing skills soon :)

Just one thing : It's a little bit hard to follow because you have not created chapters in this story so my author alert don't seem to work because of it. It's not really important, but I just thought I let you know :P

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Who is she.? Who is she? Who is she? Who is she? Who is she?

Love the story, truly do. Can't wait for more. I like how you laid out Merlin's thought proccess, and Gaius' reaction, and how they are acting around one another. You seem to have captured Arthur pretty well too. So, all in all, Love the story, and look forward to more!

I like how the story begins. I look forward to that Morgana will be now that he knows will not be alone.

I like this story so far. Wish this would have happene in the show. Anyway, can't wait to see what happens next!