OMG...Loved It...Great Job

Huh? I know you meant this to be sort of..profound maybe? But it was one of those things that the writer seems to be trying to hard. Not the worst twi-fic but sort of contrived and saccharine. Your version of Bella is a Bella that even Jake in his depressed, deluded state wouldnt want to be with.
I mean who does that? I imagined it was you when I said I do? Okaaay then sweets why did you then? If thats Bellas love I think i would rather she just hated Jake and got over it. Jake was right no matter what she says now, she didnt call, didnt write, didnt anything - so whats the point? I mean she seems to be able to put Jake out of her mind pretty good and this version of Jake, weak, needy? Just doesnt feel like the Jake we have come to know. Weak & simpering and needy was more Bella traits not Jake.
Ah well whatever..too many fanfics like this so no terribly original but not the worst either.

Wow! Painful and thought provoking and completely unexpected. Well written emotional stress, despair, confusion. The tragedy of Jacob's life where a year passes in pain and distress and loss of Pack. He is finally able to look for Bella and reach out to her and maybe heal. Edward finds them in bed and he killed them ( we thought ) was horribly tragic. Instead we have Edward sacrificing himself for their love. Amazing, I need to come back to this story and process it some more. Maybe I could write a more coherent review!

Oh my gosh! This was probably the most amazing story I have ever read about Jake and Bells. It was so hard to literally feel Jake losing his sanity and becoming so weak and lifeless. I will say that you almost got me at a certain part. I was about to cry my eyes out, but thank goodness it wasn't true. And I will have to give you credit to the fact that I actually felt bad for Edward in this one...believe me, that never happens, so you REALLY accomplished something there. Fantastic job on this! :)

Wow, I have to say this is an amazing One Shot. It was sad and beautiful. Love Jacob & Bella. Def not a Sparkler fan. **shudders with disgust** LOL!

I loved it, I feel sorry for Edward but Jake deserves to be happy too. Well done

Thank you for your hard work,and an excellent read! You have a strong talent for read your other story,as well!

This is incredible. I love crazy Jacob, but I do feel for Edward killing himself. Really awesome writing.

ABSOLUTELY FUGGING AMAZING.

TEAM JACOB FOREVER!

This was the epitomy of Team Jacob. And I loved it. So wonderful.

Wow! It started with heartbreak and ended unbelievable.

I was on the verge of tear though most of it. Jake torture. I had no idea where this was leading. But what an ending!

Just amazingly wow!

*sigh*

Oh shit! No fuckn way! Oh damn!

Wow! That took some balls there eddy!

Wow just wow

wonderful work

absolutely fantastic! so sad and beautiful. so Edward gave her her happiness, her love, her life and i'm glad for it, I guess in reality he really was the burning man after all!