Great, one of the better stories for this pairing..wish their was more. Liked your form of Astoria :-). Bump to M rating sequel?

Wow! I love this two-shot, it's really good:)
Are you going to wrote another story on Hermione and Astoria? Because I would love to read it...

Well, I prefer Fire in the Belly, but this fiction was good too.

Oh, my! It's been long since I ever such a well written story! Seriously, I'm in love with it, congratulations!

Sweet. -grins- The ending was rather abrupt, but the awesome writing more than made up for it. Really enjoyed reading your description of the characters' thoughts and their interactions.

I very like it fan-fictions)

I adore femslash!

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a sweet chapter chikinita. but the end seemed a little show of vulnerability on astorias part. i personally liked the sarcasm and was half epecting hermione to drop to her knees and plead: "Dear God! Not the yogurt!" really would have ruined the stories overall mood from romantic to somewhat juvinial, and im glad yyou didn't take that road. well chkinita, untill your next update. inferno54

Lovely ending.

I liked how you wrote Astoria and Hermione celeberating Valentine's day and thanks for a cool ending.

Awesome :) Liked reading it from Astoria's point of view. :)

Well chikinita i believe you have fallen head over heels in love with this pairing. rest easy knowing that i have my full support behind this pairing and you for that matter, i'll show it when I get to writing other stories, more yuri based ones rather than my project story, ( and I'll write at least a short story between the 10 chapter books to keep things mixed, however i believe in the 1 story at a time stratagy, to ensure no story gets left behind. but thats only on my own forgetfullness.) cant wait for part 2. Oh noes! hermione played astoria and left? party girl feels the sting of karma. inferno 54 has spoken

Got to give you credit for this pairing. I never really thought much about them, until reading your stories and now they are one of my fav. Great job and great stories.

I liked how you wrote Astoria's thoughts and feelings and please update soon thanks.