Every time I read this I start to cry

Wow. Listening to Enkantada by Masa right now, and /damn/ it fits this fic well. Or, at least, the sound does.

I've seen your work before, and I liked this. The ambiguity was a good touch - not knowing what was inside the room made it a little more... scary. Can't wait to keep exploring!

I think MY sanity is gone too...

Brilliant!

Wish it was longer!

Like Oh my god REALLY!

5 reviews just 5 FUCKING REVIEWS! you deffinatley need to at least get 19!

In MY opinion you should'a got 40,20 or 50 reviews! ;

Chilling and breathtaking.

Far out, although I feel like a prologue is in order. You're a bit too vague and leave too much for the reader to figure out for themselves. It would be very interesting to witness how they got themselves into that mess, and what exaclty those things are.

Loved it, you captured the moment incredibly well.

Lookin' forward to more,

Vaughn

Awwww .It made me cry but it was good

this story - paired with a creepy song - is awesome.

why do you people like to kill the good characters? just asking

this is sooooooo creepy, but amazing as well. epik. i'm seirous, this was amazing and sweet and romantic and scary at teh same time. it's like, a piece of work.

i love it!