Bonne écriture.

Hmm I wonder if Sara Ellis is based off of Sarah’s naming.

Da fuck! How the hell did all this happen

sigh, and it begins again ;)

wow, kinda sad. nicely done

That was really interesting. I loved the style, and the writing was great.

D8 so saaad...i like your version of these crossovers...amnesia is much more likely than any of the other scenarios...

This is fantastic! Really great job!

Fantastic story! Very enjoyable and it was a perfect length. You packed a lot of punch for such a short story! Great job!

WOW! VERY, VERY interesting story! It make me wonder... Great job!

Awesome

Oh, I love this! In particular, the gradual transition we get from Neal to Bryce. How Bryce gradually begins showing through Neal, and Chuck's persistence. And at the end, when we're not sure just how much Neal remembers, and turns out...it's Bryce who comes back and Neal who runs again one last time to keep them safe.

I've probably seen about as many episodes of Chuck as you have and I have to say, it all ties up pretty well. Nicely written :)

So glad I read this, it was very interesting, and I enjoyed reading your style.

Wow, its a really good story!

I hope there's a sequel? Really great!