The thing I like the most in here would be the style and the tone. It created a really nice atmosphere-like watching something in a B&W TV, if I made any sense? :'D (prolly not XD; )

Butbut-d'awww. You reminded me of WHY I used to love Namiki so much 33 The italicized openings for each 'drabble' were so spot on, btw. It's like ouch and aww at the same time.

And yeah I don't make sense so I should stop but me likey, so 333

This is absolutely amazing! Your writing style was very fresh and you managed to tap into Namiki's mind perfectly. I loved how every word held so much meaning and you have such a way with metaphors! And Kaichou's reaction at the end? Perfect.

Really beautiful. The use of italics and parentheses was fascinating. (I especially liked what was in the parentheses. Those really delved into Namiki's psyche).

I loved the ending!