Reviews for A Whole New Level of Pathetic
1sunfun chapter 4 . 7/4/2018
nice.
emilyhotchner-olicity-bethyl chapter 4 . 5/18/2013
I laughed a lot! Hahaha! But i kinda get sad when the doyle topic was mentioned
emilyhotchner-olicity-bethyl chapter 3 . 5/18/2013
I want this to be a hotly date-date!
emilyhotchner-olicity-bethyl chapter 2 . 5/18/2013
Hahahaha! Cute hotly banter! And love hotch's sarcasm!
gitana082 chapter 4 . 4/20/2013
Good work!
Gerardfan chapter 4 . 12/14/2012
Really enjoyed this. Love your humor.
JoanIncarnate chapter 4 . 11/25/2012
:3
JoanIncarnate chapter 2 . 11/25/2012
:D oh yeah, i see good things in this fic's future.
Melle22 chapter 4 . 5/2/2012
Omg. I LOVE this Hotch! This was so funny... and he was soooooo adorable.

I loved how they both treated the 'date'. Both simply honest, not at all flirty in the 'im trying to woo you' way. Great banter. And laughter and sex is like peanutbutter and chocolate... great separately, awesome together!

Hotch's great mood as he slipped into bed was just perfect.

Thanks for this. I needed a good laugh.

But somehow, them together... well, this would be a great start. I've never shipped them before... maybe if you wrote it.
Melle22 chapter 2 . 5/2/2012
Thank you. I needed a good laugh. I lol-ed at the exchange ending in:

"Not romantic," she cooed. "Erotic. Like … farting in the elevator."

This whole chapter was great!
Claire Randall Fraser chapter 4 . 4/22/2012
This was so much fun to read.
ficdirectory chapter 4 . 1/12/2012
I really love your characterization of Emily and the inclusion of her past coming back to haunt her. I love that "poor Sergio" wasn't expecting a shoulder that high, and that Em takes him, with her gun, to be sure that there are no intruders. :)
ficdirectory chapter 3 . 1/12/2012
I love that they both played piano and Em would have been happier with a bomb. And Hotch comparing her to art is amazing.
ficdirectory chapter 2 . 1/12/2012
Okay. I loved Hotch walking through the parking garage and hearing someone behind him. How he instinctively moves and turns slightly. Seaver was unexpected and great. Seriously loved her lighthearted nature that we never got to see on the show - and certainly never in any of my fic, LOL. But Prentiss wins it all because I think you've nailed her angry side. I imagine her with a well-developed sense of revenge and a heart she has to protect. I wonder how dinner will go...
ficdirectory chapter 1 . 1/12/2012
I'm liking the fact that Hotch's temper is making an appearance. And that all the women in his world seem to be hormonal and crabby. On to see what happens next!
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