Wonderful prologue! Loved how the Volturi plotted their revenge through-out this whole chapter! Very well-written and executed! Keep up the good work!

I cant believe that I found this gem of a story! You are such an amazing writer. The way you had the conflicts set up, the character development achieved through these conflicts, the imperfect but perfect ending; it is all a creative masterpiece. This story needs to recognized for its outstanding work of creativity. Thank you so much for creating this wonderful story and for sharing this with us. I hope to read more of your creations!

Hmmm don’t know why Bella is being miserable about missing out on her human family and her college credits. Did she not know that when she was “beggingEdward to change her, that she was going to give those things up? How shortsighted can one person be?!

Soooooooooo let me get this one straight. Everyone of the James trio are dead... count less people dead in Seattle and a additional 13 to 19 vamps dead from Victoria’s army; all done to “save” Bella, but when she wants to kill to save your sorry sorry ass, all of a sudden Killing is wrong.

Wooooowww what a hypocrite. Dude made all his family and all her pack friends killer to keep her alive, but when she wants to do the same for you, she is a monster!

Wasn’t it that double standard kind of thinking that got you both in this mess? That all your humanity alter worship from the cult of Carlisle?

I wonder if he will ever figure out the real source of his issues are his mental hang ups on what he thinks humanity and himself should be like. He wants to live the textbook definition of that but with all the vampiric benefits. Hypocrite.

Can this dude ever make a right decision? I really don’t think so.

Love this fic. Its a crying shame it only got few reviews when not so well-written fics gets 1K reviews.

This was beautiful beyond words.
I can't express how wonderful and overwhelming it was for me.
It made me cry often for the beautiful scenes that were playing in my head. Wow...just WOW!
You MUST write a sequel to this!
THANK YOU!

I wanted to finished the whole story before reviewing but I can't stop myself...this is SO AMAZING!
Now I'll finish it all...NO more distractions!

I wasn't impressed by Edwards so called maturity ...I was pissed! he can kill Victoria but not et bella kill a bitch that has been manipulating and controlling peoples lives for fucking centuries? Chelsea NEEDS to die...no one should have her kind of power. Bella should have killed the bitch right there and Corin needs to go with a quickness

Nicely told back story on Marcus and Didyme.

The Cullens are beginning to piece it together!

Wow, Aro played on every insecurity she ever possessed in regards to Edward and his family. She believed the lies pretty easily.

A really rough chapter and low point for Dominic! He seems pretty intelligent though in figuring out what's going on.

Aro is so cold-hearted, a truly awful being. Great portrayal of him.

Very interesting proceedings! Love Marcus.

Edward's dream was heartbreaking! Such a sweet scene that will never be!

I really thought Dominic was going to get away!