I really liked your story, i think that you're an incredible writer

I love this story, I've been rereading it probably at least once a year for the last 6 years.

I really like it. The emotions are so delicately depicted and I am very touched reading them.

Loveeeeee

so funny and good amazing love it

Nay, Being a Shika/Temari fan makes more sense than a Shika/Shiho. And Yoshino is pissed that she missed the excitement of waiting for a grandchild, but at least there is a grandson for her to dote on. And I agree with Kei, grandparents are so much more exciting than a dad.

This was a very nice story... Well written but it felt a bit rushed

Personally, I found this very well written! I really enjoyed how you put a spin on the charactershow you made Kei to be; especially the Nara men. It reminded me of their portrayal in the manga/anime. Nice little plotback story to begin with. I'd also like to comment on how well you wrote the characters to be so humanrelatable. With mangafiction in general, sometimes the fact that the characters are human completely just flies over your heard. You made that clear, so a big thumbs up. This is the first story of yours I have read, I'll be followingsurely will read some of your other works!

Oh gosh!
I really really love this story!
You're a great writer and I would ask you if I can traslate all your works for the Italian readers .. Obviously, I'll respect your work by inserting the link of your page ... And even if you don't write Shikatema ff for a while
hope I will see some new stuff from you soon

My favorite shikatema fafic so far

just BEAUTIFUL3 I really enjoyed reading this. you did an amazing job at keeping everyone in character too

Wow, this story was beautiful,heartwrenching, yet with a sweet conclusion. I really loved how Yoshino was written and portrayed, and how she came about realizing who Kei's real father was. I like how she confronted and comforted Temari about the situation afterwards. I also like how Kei was written as basically a cute little ball of cuddly, inquisitive trouble. :) Everything about this oneshot was very much wonderful. Great job on writing this!

I absolutely loved this was funny and just down rite amazing

Keep up the good work :)

Well written and appropriately paced, with enough drama and romance to have me squirming in my seat. While the Shikatema was obviously the highlight of your fic, you did a good job portraying Yoshino. I absolutely love mama Nara and I think you did her character justice (especially the part where she lends a shoulder to Temari). Also, a standing ovation for Temari's attempt at explaining the truth to Shikamaru towards the end. I think that was priceless.

Kei is so cute! You should write more about him!