The perfect ending!:)

This story was awesome!

Can Grace be involved with the sequel. Her interactions with Danny, or even with Steve, are some of my favorite parts of the show.
If you hadn't put Cath in Steve's bed and blatantly said K ono had a crush on Danny, I was actually starting to suspect you were hinting at Steve and Danny.

I kinda wished you had put in what the couple's would be. Now I'm hooked but the thought of K ono and Danny together throws me off and I'm not too big of a fan of Cath.
I mean I'm gonna read the last couple chapters because I'm hella worried about Danny and really want Sam to come home

So Danny got a taste what it means to be a Seal.

Kono has a crush on him and I guess I'd like to see if anything came from it :)

The story has many possible pairng options and some you could squint for, some not :)

Liked to read it.
And hope there'll be a sequel.

Regards,
Lunary

Just read this now, its a really great story and I think you got the characters spot on.

Nice work!

Oz

OMG since I just started watching Hawaii Five-0 (like as in this week) I just finally read this. Loved it. Nice story line and well written. :) Now I'm going to go stalk your profile.

Wonderful story, I loved it. You did a great job with all the characterizations. You had me worried for awhile but I'm glad they all made it. I enjoyed reading them working together.

Really cool ending I really really hope you make a sequel with them over in L.A. instead be kind of interesting to see what they would do.

and if it would really be a Vacation! LOL!

LOVED IT! Thanks for Writing!

XD!

I really like how you ended it at the end really emotional. Especially with having Grace call her Uncle Steve!

Thanks for writing!

Totally Loving it! Can't wait to read more and find out what happened to them!

Thanks for writing!

Really good story

I thought that this was very good, and I have an idea that I think might work really well, have a case that 5-0 n\is working take them to the main land, you know some thing that might involve Steve's Mom or something, and they have to follow things to the source in LA.

That was a really great ending to the story. It would be great if you considered writing a sequel to this where Steve and 5-0 go to LA to visit Sam and NCIS. That would be an interesting story line.

That was great. I am a little surprised that Erikson didn't notice that Callen was hiding off on the side. I'm glad that everything is over and it is all behind them. I'm a little sad that the next chapter is the last chapter.