Sugar overload! this was so sweet! I also love sugar and this fic was perfect in my eyes!

That. Was so so sweet.

I love it.

I've read this for the third time and it is still the cutest thing ever. I REALLY wish you would write a sequel, but it would be understandable if you don't.

The story was cute, I enjoyed it and the character personalities were coming from your writing. o

Kawaii - Plus the grammar was good, too. The smut was pretty bad though...

awww this is sooo cute! i love it! And I agree that Sugar works!

Oh my. So lovely. I adore this pairing and you've captured everything I love about them so well. Especially in the dialog- you nailed their voices here, in my opinion. You have such an excellent handle on these characters! Very moving, very funny, very sweet-without-being-sappy, and so VERY hot (I do seem to have a bit of an empath-kink). Also- I can definitely see Sugar (one of my favorites!) being a song appropriate to Hisoka's POV. I could probably go on about this fic forever, but I'll spare you from incessant flailing.

:::runs off to browse your other YnM fic:::

Daaaaaw :3 that was sweet (pun intended). Thanks for sharing!

It's so sweeet

You write them so well :D

OMG. This fic was sooo cute. ;; I loved it. The nickname is soo something Tsuzuki would come up with.

Such a great, romantic fic for V-day. Good job, hun!

Oh god, I love this story so much! The characters didn't seem OOC at all and it was really sweet. Fantastic job!

So cute! And and XDD I laughed several times in delight! Cute and loving, and hot. _ This was very good! I love how comfortable Hisoka is with Tsuzuki and how it started with Tsuzuki coming up with 'nicknames'. XDD AHH! It was so good! -feels light and fluffy- I keep grinning when I think of your characterization of them now! How they interacted was priceless. Especially the bantering. Oh my god, the bantering was wonderful. I know I'm gushing. Can't help it. After the all the crap they've been through, they deserve some real happiness!

SO SWEET!X3 I really enjoyed both this and CaBW. You do a marvelous job portraying these two! The ending fell into place beautifully too!

Oh... my. *touches lips*

So, my dear, when's the next time your roommate's going to be off somewhere? ;D

(And just for some actual content, I think part of the reason I think this is so hot is all the touching going on. Also, other things that I don't think I'm allowed to mention in public reviews might have something to do with it. xD)

(Also, sugar? Too cute.)

Ingenius tsuzuki or however you spell it. Cute and it made hisoka stop to actually think lol