It hurt a little to read the Nakamori part, because just 2 hour ago I watched an episode where someone was murdered and Nakamori goes "it's not Kid." The others go "?" And Nakamori coincidentally says "if there's something Kid doesn't steal, it's lives" meaning he believes in Kid's No-one-gets-hurt policy. Anyway, great chapter, go Shinichi, escape! You don't need no white knight to save you! XD

NOOOOOOOOO!

Cant believe nakamori did that...
U should insert a line brw pov changes

Bad-looking? as in ugly or evil looking?

Whether they're friends, lovers, or even family, Shinichi and Kaito are absolutely adorable together. Honestly, I wouldn't be surprised if they team up to take down the Organization in canon one day. In any case, nicely done and until next time then! ;3

This was a really great story and the ending felt perfect. You did a good job on this and I enjoyed reading it.

Cute

Beautiful! Can't wait for the next chapter!

So cuuute. Shin and Kai look like brothers.

aw :')
short but sweet ! good job :)
loved the story :) so cute

but what did the note say?

Wow! :D Awesome chapter. Very descriptive. I love it! I'm sorry for the late review... Can't wait! UPDATE SOON! Thanks!

This is great! I freaking love it! I feel like there should be a final epilogue or something. Kaito is so loveable! You did an amazing job with this fic.

Another wonderful chapter! - Hope there are sequels! It'd be sad to just leave it at that, though that is a nice ending for this one. -

:3 Thank-you geeklover for taking the time to write this out and complete it! I know Kaito and Shinichi NOT romantic isn't your favorite thing to write (though you did sneak a little bit of that in here, heh heh), but I loved your story all the same. If those two didn't have to be enemies, they'd make the greatest of friends. Best of luck with the rest of your stories, it's a real privilege for me that you made this!

Enjoy the rest of your summer!

~Ally

Wow. For the record, I greatly enjoyed your ending. It wasn't a dramatic "I love you!" statement, there was no OOC jumping into bed. It was perfectly done, believable and absolutely touching.

This totally made me go "Awwww!"

Thanks for sticking with Snakebite and giving us all such a great read!