Wish there was more

Cute, but I wish you would have added more! :)

awwwwwwwwwww

To be honest I did actually like it though there were a few things I disliked. You could have made the story longer, if not more twisted and complicated. Oh well, some people are good at shorter stories

At first it was thrilling,even in the climax. But in the end, I expected a lot. But, I guess Sakura's really flustered that time. She couldn't say anything. I thought she would cry a lot and say many mean and sweet things about him. Hahaha! Anyways, I love this story! I really really love the idea! You're a good writer :)

awww i loved it very simple yet very romantic

Nice!

Good job.:)

Haha i laughed when sasuke said believe it lol. I loved it, awesome and great writing really enjoyed it :)

I have to say, I was surprised to see a Sasuke/Sakura fiction considering the YamaSaku kick you've been on lately! Hardly complaining, of course, but just noting that you never fail to deliver! I really like the idea of Sasuke as this kind of dark shadow of protection instead of retribution, but I wasn't entirely happy with the fact that he seemed content to stalk Sakura more than anything else. I think the atmosphere you set up was a bit darker than I think you intended, but I was pleasantly surprised to see that it had lightened considerably be the time I reached the second half of the story. The only other criticism I have is the way Sakura reacted to him kissing her; I thought it was erring a bit more on her genin side than the strong kunoichi we're used to seeing the Shippuden Arc (I'm not even going to go into my rant about how messed up that entire Land of Snow arc was...*grumble, grumble*). Otherwise, I think you did a great job characterizing a character known for having very little in terms of the emotional spectrum. You really did work very well with Sasuke and it was fun to see him lose his concentration once or twice. I thought it was cute! Moreover, I enjoyed that you took the time to note Sakura's medical nin status. You're observations about the village safety precautions were also spot on! Overall, I think it was a really good come back after working with Lynn and her various pairings for so long (not that I don't love that fiery red-head, of course!) Keep 'em coming!

With love,

YuhiSakura