it's simply amazing :) I look forward to your another stories 3

*sob with violin in the background* oh my GOD! you are, without a doubt, one of the MOST amazing writers ive ever read in my entire teenage life! (so far)

you stick to the characters, you use good wording, you set the setting, you did everything freaking amazing man!

making all us intermediates feel like poo! lol! that was awesome. probably the best fanfic out of death note that ive read so far. MY GOD, MAN! I can go on and on about how amazing this story is, but i have a facebook to check! :D

PS: my favorite part was when light started to get a hard-on bah hahahaha...

PSS: ur amazing

PSSS: ...i like chocolate

I loved it! You've got Light very in character considering the situation. Well done. It's a shame you won't continue though, all well.

It s pity that you wont continue this story. I like it so far. But I look forward to your another stories ;-) Bye

DC

Aw... that's a shame. Oh well, :(

Please,write more,I like it very much.

. Pllleeaaseeee continue! I'll give you apples if you do!